Until You

Until you I knew there was a sun that rose upon the skies each day Setting in the afternoon, a twilight time display Daffodils and marigolds welcoming the spring Bluebirds in the maple trees each morning there to sing Waves upon the ocean and a moon up in the sky Stars above that twinkle as the evening passes by Mountains in the distance reaching high into the air Falling leaves in autumn and the colors that they share Early morning snowfall in a chilly coat of white Fireflies so playful on a balmy summer night I knew there were so many things yet I could just not see Until you came into my life and showed these things to me And now that I have witnessed all that nature has to view Its beauty still does not compare to what I see in you Good night Soupers
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April 10, 2017 at 10:54 PM
Very beautifully written good night, romantic, love poem Chris!:) I truly enjoy reading this one and so many others from you.A 7 +! A fav too. And for sure I'll be coming back to continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry.And thanks again n' again for visiting my pages yesterday, I deeply appreciate so much your very kind support and all my friend:))Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)) D.
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April 11, 2017 at 9:21 AM
Thank you so very much for always leaving such kind thoughts about my poetry. I appreciate your visits and the time you spend in my poetic world.
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March 28, 2017 at 11:07 AM
So beautiful!
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March 28, 2017 at 11:19 AM
Thanks so much Kim.
Melugin Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Chris, That special someone showered you with beauty and you wrote it to the nines! 7 My best to you, chuck
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March 28, 2017 at 9:24 AM
Thanks so very much Chuck. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Glad you liked this one.
Ricci Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 6:16 AM
Morning Chris. Always do you say good night and good morning in the most beautiful poetic way that enhances life. This entry is no exception. Your words are words to be shred between two special people. Just know this is why we read. Well done in its entirety.
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March 28, 2017 at 8:16 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I do try to post a smile at the beginning and the end of each day if I can. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work.
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March 28, 2017 at 1:14 AM
Another rip-snorter, Chris! Sleep well, my friend.
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March 28, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate you stopping by to read.
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March 27, 2017 at 7:52 PM
Your prose as usual are so beautiful and lovely, each line just rolls off the tongue!
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March 28, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Thanks so much Arthur. I am glad you liked this one.
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March 27, 2017 at 6:07 PM
I look forward to reading your beautiful poetry Chris. I just love this one :)
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March 28, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Thank you so much Heidi. I always look forward to your thoughts on my poetry. Your kindness is a gift I will never take for granted
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March 27, 2017 at 6:00 PM
My last poem to read tonight..but Im glad I read this..Indeed Mountains and falling snow are so beautiful..So flowers...oceans..sunsets and stars..They make us feel alive...I love those firelies....You ought to send some to meacross the moon in a jar....:).Beautiful..Indeed this world is beautiful....Mother nature is amazing..and humans...nothing compares the human heart...Fantastic Chris...I needed this lovely poem..tonight....Goodnight .A fave.
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March 28, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend and a small typo between friends is totally acceptable. : ) I appreciate your kindness always Charmaine.
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March 27, 2017 at 6:01 PM
To the human heart I meamt..Sorry for typo..Im a sleepy head right now..grr
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March 27, 2017 at 5:57 PM
So beautiful, Chris! Thank you for your comment on my "Fantasy Spy." I'm logging off for tonight now. Sweet dreams.
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March 28, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you stopped here before bidding farewell to the day.
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