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Until You

I never Truly made it through Death’s Dark Vale until... You!

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Chuck Novotny

Date: 4/3/2012 11:57:00 PM

Now that is an expression of love anyone's heart would skip a beat to hear. Bravo!! - Chuck

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 3/13/2012 10:02:00 AM

Power packed! Great write.

Elijah Prophet

Date: 1/27/2012 11:26:00 AM

dear laura, i like this poem, because i did make it through Death's Dark Vale. your experience have made you appear so much older then you are. "Love You Aswell, Laura." thank you for being you. you are endowed with so much compassion and talent. you can be anything your precious heart desire, because you are so gifted!

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/12/2012 10:49:00 AM

Did you mean "God" in this poem? Seems like it. We all face the grim reaper but it is you attitude which influences your reaction. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2012 11:13:00 AM

Very expressive of love for someone special to you..Enjoyed reading..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Thanks for the time spent there..Sara

Kyle Carlson

Date: 1/6/2012 6:50:00 PM

THREE LINES OF GRRRRRRRRRRREATNESS! - Kyle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2012 2:52:00 AM

Bravo Laura. oxox love Anne-LISE

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/5/2012 10:36:00 PM

Dear Laura, I must say Good night but YOU will be in my mind and my POETRY LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2012 10:11:00 PM

This is really nice, Laura.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 1/5/2012 10:08:00 PM

Dear Laura, Been there My LENORE was my Life, My Forever and ALWAYS, ETERNITY s WIFE, I could not get on the Chat room either Maybe some other time or Just use SOUPMAIL LOVE YOU as a Daughter or "GRANDDAUGHTER' YOU are an Outstanding POETESS YOU have Touched my HEART Deeply, LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...Harry

Dan Kearley

Date: 1/5/2012 10:02:00 PM

Hhmm? It leaves me questioning.Hhmmm?