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Until the Fall

Again and again I'd say to you Did you think it to be true This place wasn't built for you I've seen these fields burn too Seven times this valleys view You have to try and fly again High in the sky like the sun Girl don't blind my eyes Shade them a new blue Let's take any wild chance One more dance if you please Turn this 180 degrees I will always come back for you Down this river green and blue Know this to be true I will my friend Fight this fight with you till it's end Do it all again and again From the end or from begin Look not at the fall of weeds These summer time schemes They only reap false dreams We can climb to the sky lets do this Like the trees do and stand tall Make a tale further than the fall What a life I see ahead of this summer breeze By you sitting beside me Just two in a sea of leaves Until our fall if you please lets be like the trees Share another dance one last chance Forever to you this is my plea Soak up the bright and then black clouds can come at night Just smile and know its going to be alright This kind of real will steal time to heal Just kneel I am there with you Again and again I'd said this to you Please remember suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem. Love endures all. No one is ever truly alone. If no one hears you yell louder pain isn't shame

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Date: 2/17/2019 1:40:00 PM
Hello Chris Hyatt, to me this poem reads as someone consoling some one in pain when a love has gone wrong. i see someone telling someone the pain won't last. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/7/2019 6:03:00 PM
A very viewable point. I think it meant don't think I will ever give up on fighting for ypu. She loved a troubled soul so selfish he left only shattered remains at 14. My daughter will never be the same. But what kinda life would that be if she stayed the same. Just life I guess just a big ol wave. Thanks for reading sorry for delay. Hate to say the wrong thing

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