Until Forever (For "here and Now" (Contest) Sponsored By: Rick Parise)

Until Forever Faithful love Promised cries from heaven above. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 29, 2010 Poetic form: Epigram

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Date: 6/1/2010 12:39:00 PM

I really liked the message in this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Keep that faith shining and you creativity flowing!!!!! Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/1/2010 11:21:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in Rick's contest .. with this wonderful write for the song... enjoy another victory dear ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Rick Parise

Date: 6/1/2010 12:52:00 AM

congrats on your 6th place win in my contest~Rick

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/30/2010 4:45:00 PM

Nicely done...in such a short form...not an easy thing to do, but you succeeded to make it lovely!!! Good luck in the contest, Dane Ann!

Date: 5/30/2010 1:12:00 PM

What an uplifting peom. Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Best wishes in the contest. Karen

Royal Trevino

Date: 5/30/2010 12:11:00 PM

beautiful, and i'd like to thank you for a previous comment you had made me... thanks a bunch:) , Royal=(^.^)=

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2010 7:34:00 AM

Like your take on the song, Dane Ann. Short and to the point. Very nice epigram. Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/30/2010 6:34:00 AM

This is an excellent epigram. It rings with reverence. Great job and keep writing. Joseph

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/30/2010 6:23:00 AM

Loved it ... good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2010 4:58:00 AM

Interesting Epigram...Good luck in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/30/2010 3:56:00 AM

Wonderful epigram.