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Until Eternity

I can imagine hundreds of ways, I know it can happen at any time, Dust will take you, part of me will die When we're together Having a good time, I treasure the moments you're at my side Until eternity begins, I never want to say goodbye

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Robert Johnson

Date: 10/3/2012 2:23:00 PM

Wonderful little poem Sharon. You said it all in two stanza's. Hoping life's love is long and wonderful.

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/3/2012 4:10:00 PM

:)) Thank you!

Regina Asinde

Date: 10/3/2012 8:12:00 AM

wow Sharon..I love this...though it makes me feel abit sad...why should i think of death when am with my loved one..ouch! Otherwise great write!

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/3/2012 8:20:00 AM

It's more the feeling you get when you're away from them. The idea that you don't know what you have until it's gone...

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/3/2012 8:20:00 AM

Thanks you for reading my stuff:))

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 10/3/2012 6:53:00 AM

Oh this is a treasure, really enjoyed Sharon - Shaz :)

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/3/2012 7:51:00 AM

Thank you!

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 10/3/2012 6:52:00 AM

lovely, love it!!!!!!!!!!!

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/3/2012 7:53:00 AM

Aw..thank you:) Glad you enjoyed it!