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Until Death Do Us Part - a Kimo

The road to happiness is full of ruts But together step-by-step With love, we’ll pave the way For: Dr. Ram’s Contest: Marriage

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2011 9:37:00 PM

So glad this won so that I could finally notice it was here at Soup. GREAT poem, Elaine. Congratulations.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/4/2011 12:49:00 PM

congradulations on your win in the contest. john

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2011 7:32:00 AM

Few couples have a smooth road to follow through life. Relying on each other and taking each day as it comes is the key to happiness. Congratulations on your big win, Lainie! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 6:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Lainie in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/4/2011 2:43:00 AM

that' s what love is, elaine.. applause for the high slot in this contest.. congrats! :) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/3/2011 7:11:00 PM

What a very inspiring write this is Lainie:) I think anyone getting married should keep this in mind :) Super congrats on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 6:16:00 PM

Congrats Lainie on your wonderful fantastic win in the wedding contest my friend with this dynamic piece.. enjoy another top ten with luv.. always..

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/3/2011 4:31:00 PM

Ahh....this should be in a fortune cookie!! These well inspired words of wisdom!! Congratulations, Elaine!!

John Freeman

Date: 4/3/2011 4:19:00 PM

You're looking good up there at the top Elaine. Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place honor. Quite true, a touching verse friend. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2011 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, Elaine

Denis Joe

Date: 12/21/2008 1:45:00 AM

This is a great poem Elaine. First off. the use of birds against the elements is a well used metaphor in this poem. The language is everyday that allows the poem to be appreciated as a poem and not an exercise. I like the lack of punctuation, it reminds me of Appollanaire's statement that the lines are already seperate therefore the reader knows where to pause. I'm a sticler for grammer but I can appreciate what you have done here.

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/20/2008 3:54:00 PM

I always am an awe of the tiniest birds who survive the winter through. Of course I am thinking this is all a metaphor, and well done at that. Amazing the human will. As is nature. Miracles abound. Beautiful write. Love, shar

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/20/2008 8:02:00 AM

Kristin's gonna love this! ...she's a wind freak. Those little birds will just not be thwarted! Best wishes, Keith

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/20/2008 3:44:00 AM

a wonderful lesson here, and one I live daily - excellent Elaine, love, Kristin :)

John Rhinem

Date: 12/19/2008 9:35:00 PM

"Hello Beautiful & Gifted Elaine George!"~Such a depthful soulful write here dear lady! I love your sincereness of hope and statement within it I believe~that you too are as those creations birds~but even more precious are "You!"~for as "Christ" said, "How much more precious are 'You' than they!"~"Happy Holidays Dear, My Love Always, John,"~By Beautiful Lady!:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/19/2008 6:02:00 PM

Excellent images here! Those tiny little creatures up against a force of nature, yet still undaunted! ~ Great job!~ Carrie