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Fragmented Verse
Invented by Constance La France,  verse only, no rhyme. Left align
12 lines,  broken down into 4 stanzas, includes indentation on some lines
Indented lines are- line 3- 26 spaces/line 4- 28 spaces/ line 9 &10 -8 spaces/ 11&12-  26spaces/28spaces. Line 9 and 10 - form a question.
Syllables- 12/10/4/4  12/10/10/12  8/8  4/4

Sometimes, love is no match for unrestrained anger, normal boundaries are stretched to breaking. Rage takes over, and you let it. Your teeth bare down, locked in a menacing grimace, your pulse races, and your muscles quiver. It happens quickly; there's no time to think, uncontrollable, innate instincts take over. When your friends try to placate you, why do you rebuff their attempts? Losing control, you act insane.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/6/2018 9:21:00 PM
Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/7/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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