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My beer-swilling auntie called Mabel Could drink most blokes under the table She sups pint after pint Almost every night No wonder her legs are unstable! 06~07~17

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Date: 6/15/2017 3:09:00 PM
LMAO, good one!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/15/2017 3:13:00 PM
had fun with this write thankfully auntie Mable is fiction for me but she looks like a real laugh in the picture!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/14/2017 11:13:00 AM
I've read about Jan's Auntie Mabel.......Whose drinking became quite a fable........When asked what she's drinking.............she said without thinking........."I'm so drunk I can't read the label".
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/14/2017 2:30:00 PM
ha ha ha - you should post that one on your page Ray lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/10/2017 3:49:00 PM
wtf, i just didnt expect....to read anything quite like that....because i am no bloke but i drink like a fish....and unstable legs is such a delicious dish....so if she is less than 55, send your aunt my way....i will remind her of childhood, she will Love how i play....lol....crazy write jan....;)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 6:57:00 PM
lol Eric! Sorry to say auntie Mable is just a figment of my rahter vivid imagination lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 7:08:00 PM
So funny , jan, that was me in my younger years ~*
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 2:48:00 PM
lol Eve don't tell all your secrets!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 4:30:00 PM
From his vantage point under the table//Wilbur was spying on Mabel//She started to totter//He thought that he ott'er//help her but he was unable. Mabel reminds me of my friend Wilda Wildcat;-) FUN ONE JAN JAN!!!! Huggersnicks ~ j
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 2:49:00 PM
ha ha ha John you should post that one:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 3:49:00 PM
Can't resist your Limericks Jan. Where's the Poop?
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 2:49:00 PM
I just love the limerick form Charlie - I guess some folks see all my poem as poop!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 3:12:00 PM
Auntie Mabel, with her mug of beer and tambourine, looks like she could be fun. A great fun write, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 2:39:00 PM
They drank themselves under the table--- drinking white lightning by ladle---------- so off to the stall--------------------------- for the twelve hand high doll-------------- grab a saddle and unstable Mable-------- Just having some fun Jan.....nice one
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 2:55:00 PM
I love it when people add limericks as their replies John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Benard Kaunda
Date: 6/7/2017 3:43:00 PM
well constructed
Date: 6/7/2017 2:27:00 PM
lol...Nice one jan
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Date: 6/10/2017 2:55:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 12:35:00 PM
awesome.
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Date: 6/10/2017 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 12:16:00 PM
So funny Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 2:56:00 PM
Cheers Tim:-):-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 12:06:00 PM
- She enjoys life :))) - Love it, Jan :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 2:57:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 11:34:00 AM
LOL I knew this would be funny Jan. Thanks for another laugh :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/10/2017 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 11:10:00 AM
Hi Jan , so funny , keep that girl sitting lol :)))hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/7/2017 11:19:00 AM
She's a bit wobbly on her legs poor dear and she can't understand why lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 10:59:00 AM
bottoms up, fun poet :D
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/7/2017 11:00:00 AM
Thanks so much ETT -thankfully its a fun fiction write for me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/7/2017 10:41:00 AM
This was funny Jan. Really funny.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 6/7/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thanks Chris:- I wrote it when I was working yesterday and I have to keep my brain active so i take a notepad and scribble my thoughts:-) hugs Jan xx