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Unstable Mable

My beer-swilling auntie called Mabel
Could drink most blokes under the table
She sups pint after pint
Almost every night
No wonder her legs are unstable!

06~07~17

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

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Jack Horne Date: 6/15/2017 3:09:00 PM LMAO, good one! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/15/2017 3:13:00 PM had fun with this write thankfully auntie Mable is fiction for me but she looks like a real laugh in the picture!:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie Date: 6/10/2017 3:49:00 PM wtf, i just didnt expect....to read anything quite like that....because i am no bloke but i drink like a fish....and unstable legs is such a delicious dish....so if she is less than 55, send your aunt my way....i will remind her of childhood, she will Love how i play....lol....crazy write jan....;) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 6:57:00 PM lol Eric! Sorry to say auntie Mable is just a figment of my rahter vivid imagination lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 6/7/2017 7:08:00 PM So funny , jan, that was me in my younger years ~* Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:48:00 PM lol Eve don't tell all your secrets!:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner Date: 6/7/2017 5:39:00 PM Sounds like Auntie Mable's gettin' her swerve on:) Fun one Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:48:00 PM Deffo Daniel!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 6/7/2017 4:30:00 PM From his vantage point under the table//Wilbur was spying on Mabel//She started to totter//He thought that he ott'er//help her but he was unable. Mabel reminds me of my friend Wilda Wildcat;-) FUN ONE JAN JAN!!!! Huggersnicks ~ j Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:49:00 PM ha ha ha John you should post that one:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith Date: 6/7/2017 3:49:00 PM Can't resist your Limericks Jan. Where's the Poop? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:49:00 PM I just love the limerick form Charlie - I guess some folks see all my poem as poop!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 6/7/2017 3:12:00 PM Auntie Mabel, with her mug of beer and tambourine, looks like she could be fun. A great fun write, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:54:00 PM Thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless Date: 6/7/2017 2:39:00 PM They drank themselves under the table--- drinking white lightning by ladle---------- so off to the stall--------------------------- for the twelve hand high doll-------------- grab a saddle and unstable Mable-------- Just having some fun Jan.....nice one Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:55:00 PM I love it when people add limericks as their replies John:-) hugs Jan xx Benard Kaunda Date: 6/7/2017 3:43:00 PM well constructed

Joseph May Date: 6/7/2017 2:27:00 PM lol...Nice one jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:55:00 PM Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 6/7/2017 12:35:00 PM awesome. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:56:00 PM Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 6/7/2017 12:16:00 PM So funny Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:56:00 PM Cheers Tim:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/7/2017 12:06:00 PM - She enjoys life :))) - Love it, Jan :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:57:00 PM Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands Date: 6/7/2017 11:34:00 AM LOL I knew this would be funny Jan. Thanks for another laugh :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/10/2017 2:58:00 PM Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Eye Truth-Teller Date: 6/7/2017 10:59:00 AM bottoms up, fun poet :D Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/7/2017 11:00:00 AM Thanks so much ETT -thankfully its a fun fiction write for me:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green Date: 6/7/2017 10:41:00 AM This was funny Jan. Really funny. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/7/2017 10:44:00 AM Thanks Chris:- I wrote it when I was working yesterday and I have to keep my brain active so i take a notepad and scribble my thoughts:-) hugs Jan xx