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My beer-swilling auntie called Mabel Could drink most blokes under the table She sups pint after pint Almost every night No wonder her legs are unstable! 06~07~17

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/15/2017 3:09:00 PM

LMAO, good one!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/15/2017 3:13:00 PM

had fun with this write thankfully auntie Mable is fiction for me but she looks like a real laugh in the picture!:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 6/10/2017 3:49:00 PM

wtf, i just didnt expect....to read anything quite like that....because i am no bloke but i drink like a fish....and unstable legs is such a delicious dish....so if she is less than 55, send your aunt my way....i will remind her of childhood, she will Love how i play....lol....crazy write jan....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 6:57:00 PM

lol Eric! Sorry to say auntie Mable is just a figment of my rahter vivid imagination lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/7/2017 7:08:00 PM

So funny , jan, that was me in my younger years ~*

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:48:00 PM

lol Eve don't tell all your secrets!:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/7/2017 5:39:00 PM

Sounds like Auntie Mable's gettin' her swerve on:) Fun one Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:48:00 PM

Deffo Daniel!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 6/7/2017 4:30:00 PM

From his vantage point under the table//Wilbur was spying on Mabel//She started to totter//He thought that he ott'er//help her but he was unable. Mabel reminds me of my friend Wilda Wildcat;-) FUN ONE JAN JAN!!!! Huggersnicks ~ j

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:49:00 PM

ha ha ha John you should post that one:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/7/2017 3:49:00 PM

Can't resist your Limericks Jan. Where's the Poop?

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:49:00 PM

I just love the limerick form Charlie - I guess some folks see all my poem as poop!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 6/7/2017 3:12:00 PM

Auntie Mabel, with her mug of beer and tambourine, looks like she could be fun. A great fun write, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:54:00 PM

Thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 6/7/2017 2:39:00 PM

They drank themselves under the table--- drinking white lightning by ladle---------- so off to the stall--------------------------- for the twelve hand high doll-------------- grab a saddle and unstable Mable-------- Just having some fun Jan.....nice one

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:55:00 PM

I love it when people add limericks as their replies John:-) hugs Jan xx

Benard Kaunda
Date: 6/7/2017 3:43:00 PM

well constructed

Joseph May

Date: 6/7/2017 2:27:00 PM

lol...Nice one jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:55:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/7/2017 12:35:00 PM

awesome.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:56:00 PM

Thanks Dale:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/7/2017 12:16:00 PM

So funny Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:56:00 PM

Cheers Tim:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2017 12:06:00 PM

- She enjoys life :))) - Love it, Jan :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:57:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2017 11:34:00 AM

LOL I knew this would be funny Jan. Thanks for another laugh :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2017 2:58:00 PM

Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/7/2017 11:10:00 AM

Hi Jan , so funny , keep that girl sitting lol :)))hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2017 11:19:00 AM

She's a bit wobbly on her legs poor dear and she can't understand why lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eye Truth-Teller

Date: 6/7/2017 10:59:00 AM

bottoms up, fun poet :D

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2017 11:00:00 AM

Thanks so much ETT -thankfully its a fun fiction write for me:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 6/7/2017 10:41:00 AM

This was funny Jan. Really funny.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2017 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Chris:- I wrote it when I was working yesterday and I have to keep my brain active so i take a notepad and scribble my thoughts:-) hugs Jan xx