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Unstable Mable

My beer-swilling auntie called Mabel
Could drink most blokes under the table
She sups pint after pint
Almost every night
No wonder her legs are unstable!

06~07~17

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Jack Horne

June 15, 2017 at 3:09 PM

LMAO, good one!

Jan Allison

June 15, 2017 at 3:13 PM

had fun with this write thankfully auntie Mable is fiction for me but she looks like a real laugh in the picture!:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

June 10, 2017 at 3:49 PM

wtf, i just didnt expect....to read anything quite like that....because i am no bloke but i drink like a fish....and unstable legs is such a delicious dish....so if she is less than 55, send your aunt my way....i will remind her of childhood, she will Love how i play....lol....crazy write jan....;)

Jan Allison

June 10, 2017 at 6:57 PM

lol Eric! Sorry to say auntie Mable is just a figment of my rahter vivid imagination lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

June 7, 2017 at 7:08 PM

So funny , jan, that was me in my younger years ~*

Jan Allison

June 10, 2017 at 2:48 PM

lol Eve don't tell all your secrets!:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner

June 7, 2017 at 5:39 PM

Sounds like Auntie Mable's gettin' her swerve on:) Fun one Jan!

Jan Allison

June 10, 2017 at 2:48 PM

Deffo Daniel!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

June 7, 2017 at 4:30 PM

From his vantage point under the table//Wilbur was spying on Mabel//She started to totter//He thought that he ott'er//help her but he was unable. Mabel reminds me of my friend Wilda Wildcat;-) FUN ONE JAN JAN!!!! Huggersnicks ~ j

Jan Allison

June 10, 2017 at 2:49 PM

ha ha ha John you should post that one:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith

June 7, 2017 at 3:49 PM

Can't resist your Limericks Jan. Where's the Poop?

Jan Allison

June 10, 2017 at 2:49 PM

I just love the limerick form Charlie - I guess some folks see all my poem as poop!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

June 7, 2017 at 3:12 PM

Auntie Mabel, with her mug of beer and tambourine, looks like she could be fun. A great fun write, Jan.

Jan Allison

June 10, 2017 at 2:54 PM

Thanks Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

June 7, 2017 at 2:39 PM

They drank themselves under the table--- drinking white lightning by ladle---------- so off to the stall--------------------------- for the twelve hand high doll-------------- grab a saddle and unstable Mable-------- Just having some fun Jan.....nice one

Jan Allison

June 10, 2017 at 2:55 PM

I love it when people add limericks as their replies John:-) hugs Jan xx

Benard Kaunda

June 7, 2017 at 3:43 PM

well constructed