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Unspoken Longings

Fairy tales and love stories Each has a beginning Each has an ending, but our love~ an endless story I don't know where to start. Paintings in varied forms~ from abstracts to impressionisms, I've seen them all in galleries, museums and ancient walls; So I tried to sketch your paradigm and sculpted it in the clouds, But I, I couldn't make an obra that will depict unspoken longings to see you one more time. Sunsets and dawns~ I've witnessed them thousand times with the birds and the trees; The pleasure they bring no matter how sublime can't appease my loneliness without you. My love, I miss you so much~ and so I write this poem. October 11, 2020

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Date: 1/23/2021 4:15:00 AM
Creative winner. Way to go. Very romantic. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:28:00 AM
"Tried to sketch your paradigm" - one of many beautiful and very creative phrases in your winning poem. Congratulations! All the best!
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Date: 11/8/2020 5:31:00 AM
JCB, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge _Constance
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Date: 11/6/2020 9:12:00 AM
JCB, the beauty of your poignant pen spills easily upon the wanting page. Such moving imagery stirs in emotive ink that seems to be made of a gentle wash of tears. I love the soulful spirit of this piece. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/29/2020 12:29:00 PM
A most lovely and expressive poem. When spoken words are not available, a poem such as this one can say it all! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/24/2020 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful. I liked how the words danced to perfect meaning. I liked the flow of thoughts that led to perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
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Date: 10/22/2020 5:45:00 PM
Did this one win? I need to go see. I love it so much, and since I fell on it again, I think i need to FAVE it.
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Date: 10/18/2020 4:41:00 PM
A beautiful poem JCB. You have a wonderful way of expressing love :)
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Date: 10/18/2020 11:33:00 AM
Hello JCB Burl, a romantic poem of love. I enjoyed . Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/16/2020 3:47:00 PM
A touching ode to your love, so poignant, best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 10/16/2020 1:04:00 PM
Blessed I am to read such beauty! Sweet words on love.. amazing paintings rendering a deep longing.. a wondrous Nature awakening your muse of poetry! And so is your amazing poesy, dear JCB! So much enjoyed the read! And a great pleasure to walk your path of beauty! My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings.
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Date: 10/16/2020 6:02:00 AM
a person, an event, or an awakening pushes one to express himself in a creative way...this piece defines such an epiphany... beautifully done, JC... huggs
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Date: 10/16/2020 6:00:00 AM
Very lovely and romantic, JCB. Janice
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Date: 10/12/2020 11:50:00 PM
It sounds like an artist creation your pen has created. Great for a win.... good luck
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Date: 10/12/2020 8:20:00 PM
EXCELLENT. i also think in a very similar way. I appreciate and admire your concept. Blessing.
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Date: 10/11/2020 1:34:00 PM
hey, you did yours similar to my style. You know what that means!!! Great minds.... (but I think you did yours better) Love this, JCB
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Date: 10/11/2020 12:44:00 PM
Such a caress to the soul... gentle and serene, a warm note of mystery! This enchants me, my friend. A lovely poem
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Date: 10/11/2020 10:19:00 AM
Such a tender love and longing you express, JCB. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 10/11/2020 9:27:00 AM
This is truly enchanting! Loved it!
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Date: 10/11/2020 5:53:00 AM
This a awesome--stunning write, JCB.
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