Unspoken Harmony

Her dress flowing, I watch her laugh as she runs through the trees
They stand tall at her regality, bloom full with her smile
She glides as if on air; her grace natural, incomparable

The breeze blowing through her hair, she seems unreal
As if specific time and ability was spent on her alone

I look at him watching her, and she has no idea
The admiration in his eyes or the hopes in his heart
She pulls light out in everything she’s around

I see her light in him; watching as his face glows
There is nothing in this world worth more to him

I look at him watching her, and she has no idea
How he would give everything he has to make her smile
…everything that he is to make her love him

He stares in her eyes and I see all that she is reflected back
I look at her watching him, and he has no idea
…that she smiles because he is already everything to her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 6:19 PM
Hello F,J, Thomas, I like this poem. it tells a love story. Have a nice evening my friend.
Thomas Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 1:00 PM
Thank you Darlene :)
Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Amazing love...blissful
Thomas Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Hi JW. Thank you :)
Ajmal Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Ahh it s such a sweet and romantic write about two lovers who love each other yet are unaware that their partner also hold the same feelings, I really enjoyed reading this poem on yours, good luck
Thomas Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Thank you Faraz :)
Turner Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Now this is LOVE. A bit introverted but so sweet. This is one of those poems you start reading faster trying to get to the end to see how it all turns out. Wonderfully penned Flo. Congratulations on POTW. Well deserved.
Thomas Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Good evening Daniel. Thank you so much :)
Barden Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 2:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic and charming ... enjoyed this very much, FJ. Keep up the great work! :-)
Thomas Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Thank you again Greg :)
Y. Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Wow! Flo, This is so beautiful and romantic. The love that they have for one another is so sweet. I enjoyed watching it unfold. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Thomas Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Good morning Alexis. Thank you so much :)
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:35 AM
So beautiful. x
Thomas Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thank you Leanne.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 10:15 PM
So romantic :) Congratulations on potw! xomo
Thomas Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 11:14 PM
Thanks Maureen ;^)
Duet Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Hi FJ...I'm back to congratulate you on getting a well-deserved "POTW". Such an enjoyable read.
Donnelly Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Wow, Fj, congratulations for having your/this wonderful poem featured as POTW! Awesome! Have a great week. :) ~ Artsie
Thomas Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Hi Artsie :) Thank you so much.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 12:52 AM
It seems to be about a couple u know, in love and happy together. Wow as a third party onlooker u described the scene and imagery so poetically, imaginatively and beautifully. Kudos. Soo nice to read from your pen again. I luv interaction in this cold world, Pleez add your thoughts/comment to my newest poem too, or this world feels too robotic ah
Thomas Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:52 PM
It is a memory of long ago S.zaynab; thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words.
Wanter Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 9:49 AM
So uniquely written as an observer. Congratulations to you!!!
Thomas Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thank you so much Sunlite! I'm so glad you think so!
Williams Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Back to say a big congrats on POTW my sweet friend. Such a great write....Maria xxx
Thomas Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:16 PM
Thank you Maria. It didn't place at all in the "love poem" contest I'd entered it in so this was nice to see :)
Allison Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 6:20 AM
woohoo POTW for you and POTD for Eileen how wonderful two wonderful ladies are being honoured on the same day:-) I've got 2 fingers in action now Flo lol lol lol:-):-) hugs jan xx
Thomas Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:17 PM
I have to admit I wouldn't think you should do that either; but I have no medical degree so I would have to hope that they are correct lol.
Allison Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 12:12 PM
I've been told I actually need to move the finger and try and make a fist - goes against my thinking with something that is broken, but this was from the fracture clinic!:-) hugs Jan xx
Thomas Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Jan you are such a beautifully strong woman. I'm glad you're healing but please don't push it so they heal properly. Seeing comments from you and Eileen first thing this morning was exactly what I needed :)
Manassian Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 4:28 AM
OH MY!!! What a beauty! I didn't expect that sweet delicious ending. Lovely! <3
Thomas Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 9:53 AM
Good morning Highness :) I have been a bit in the dumps so seeing your smile this morning has just put me off to a wonderful start. Thank you
Duet Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:17 PM
What a beautiful poem. Love it.
J.T. Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Beautiful; -JT
Thomas Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Thank you JT.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:01 AM
What a beautiful romantic piece.
Thomas Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Thank you Rick :)
Williams Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Oh what a lovely poem Flo, so good to see that they have eyes for each other after all. I was beginning to think it was a bit one sided till I read the last verse.Takes the phrase "Love is Blind" to a new level, I guess.....Maria xxx
Thomas Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Lol nope, it's both sided :p I am very happy you like it Maria!
Dome Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:22 AM
What a wonderful poem. The visuals were so clear in my mind I could see them. Very dream like. Love it very much. Well done. Hope you are keeping well. Yes, I'm still crazy as ever my friend. Thank you for your comment on Man flu. best wishes. Pete. tygertyger.
Thomas Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Pete! Good morning you! Thank you for the lovely comment and the visit :) I'm glad to 'see' you :p
May Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:19 AM
She, the apple of his eye..he, the joy of her heart..beautiful write Flo
Thomas Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Exactly :) Thanks Joseph.
Richards Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 5:37 PM
What a lovely poem of love without words. It is in the eyes !! You have captured what I have seen in the very special couples who have been blessed with true-love ! Nicely done!
Thomas Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Carrie I hope you've seen it a lot; it seems a rarity today. Thank you Carrie :)
Ellison Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Flo... this is an absolutely beautiful sweet friend! I am so happy that I dropped by!!! Love to you dearest Flo!!! Happy Jack XOXO
Thomas Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Love right back atcha my dear friend ;•* thank you Jack
Talbot Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:33 PM
So glad you dropped by FJ, I'd of probably not got to read your beautiful poem, thank you for your visit. Mick
Thomas Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much Mick :)
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 12:22 PM
Beautifully done, Flow, the imagery well done, the flow is wonderful.. as always your talent shines... Hugs
Thomas Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:13 PM
Thanks so much my dear Eve :)
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