Unspoken Harmony

Her dress flowing, I watch her laugh as she runs through the trees
They stand tall at her regality, bloom full with her smile
She glides as if on air; her grace natural, incomparable

The breeze blowing through her hair, she seems unreal
As if specific time and ability was spent on her alone

I look at him watching her, and she has no idea
The admiration in his eyes or the hopes in his heart
She pulls light out in everything she’s around

I see her light in him; watching as his face glows
There is nothing in this world worth more to him

I look at him watching her, and she has no idea
How he would give everything he has to make her smile
…everything that he is to make her love him

He stares in her eyes and I see all that she is reflected back
I look at her watching him, and he has no idea
…that she smiles because he is already everything to her
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Date: 6/3/2018 6:19:00 PM
Hello F,J, Thomas, I like this poem. it tells a love story. Have a nice evening my friend.
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FJ Thomas
Date: 7/9/2018 1:00:00 PM
Thank you Darlene :)
Date: 5/28/2018 9:16:00 AM
Amazing love...blissful
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/29/2018 12:26:00 PM
Hi JW. Thank you :)
Date: 5/19/2018 4:19:00 PM
Ahh it s such a sweet and romantic write about two lovers who love each other yet are unaware that their partner also hold the same feelings, I really enjoyed reading this poem on yours, good luck
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Date: 5/29/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Faraz :)
Date: 5/12/2018 11:38:00 AM
Now this is LOVE. A bit introverted but so sweet. This is one of those poems you start reading faster trying to get to the end to see how it all turns out. Wonderfully penned Flo. Congratulations on POTW. Well deserved.
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/12/2018 6:54:00 PM
Good evening Daniel. Thank you so much :)
Date: 5/11/2018 2:00:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic and charming ... enjoyed this very much, FJ. Keep up the great work! :-)
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/12/2018 6:53:00 PM
Thank you again Greg :)
Date: 5/8/2018 10:43:00 AM
Wow! Flo, This is so beautiful and romantic. The love that they have for one another is so sweet. I enjoyed watching it unfold. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/9/2018 7:45:00 AM
Good morning Alexis. Thank you so much :)
Date: 5/8/2018 2:35:00 AM
So beautiful. x
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/9/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Leanne.
Date: 5/7/2018 10:15:00 PM
So romantic :) Congratulations on potw! xomo
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/7/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Maureen ;^)
Date: 5/7/2018 7:30:00 PM
Hi FJ...I'm back to congratulate you on getting a well-deserved "POTW". Such an enjoyable read.
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Date: 5/7/2018 10:15:00 AM
Wow, Fj, congratulations for having your/this wonderful poem featured as POTW! Awesome! Have a great week. :) ~ Artsie
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/7/2018 8:56:00 PM
Hi Artsie :) Thank you so much.
Date: 5/7/2018 12:52:00 AM
It seems to be about a couple u know, in love and happy together. Wow as a third party onlooker u described the scene and imagery so poetically, imaginatively and beautifully. Kudos. Soo nice to read from your pen again. I luv interaction in this cold world, Pleez add your thoughts/comment to my newest poem too, or this world feels too robotic ah
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/7/2018 8:52:00 PM
It is a memory of long ago S.zaynab; thank you very much. I appreciate your kind words.
Date: 5/6/2018 9:49:00 AM
So uniquely written as an observer. Congratulations to you!!!
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/6/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Sunlite! I'm so glad you think so!
Date: 5/6/2018 7:34:00 AM
Back to say a big congrats on POTW my sweet friend. Such a great write....Maria xxx
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/6/2018 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Maria. It didn't place at all in the "love poem" contest I'd entered it in so this was nice to see :)
Date: 5/6/2018 6:20:00 AM
woohoo POTW for you and POTD for Eileen how wonderful two wonderful ladies are being honoured on the same day:-) I've got 2 fingers in action now Flo lol lol lol:-):-) hugs jan xx
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/6/2018 1:17:00 PM
I have to admit I wouldn't think you should do that either; but I have no medical degree so I would have to hope that they are correct lol.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2018 12:12:00 PM
I've been told I actually need to move the finger and try and make a fist - goes against my thinking with something that is broken, but this was from the fracture clinic!:-) hugs Jan xx
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/6/2018 9:51:00 AM
Jan you are such a beautifully strong woman. I'm glad you're healing but please don't push it so they heal properly. Seeing comments from you and Eileen first thing this morning was exactly what I needed :)
Date: 5/6/2018 4:28:00 AM
OH MY!!! What a beauty! I didn't expect that sweet delicious ending. Lovely! <3
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/6/2018 9:53:00 AM
Good morning Highness :) I have been a bit in the dumps so seeing your smile this morning has just put me off to a wonderful start. Thank you
Date: 5/3/2018 6:17:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. Love it.
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Date: 5/3/2018 10:00:00 AM
Beautiful; -JT
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/3/2018 2:04:00 PM
Thank you JT.
Date: 5/3/2018 8:01:00 AM
What a beautiful romantic piece.
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/3/2018 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Rick :)
Date: 5/3/2018 7:56:00 AM
Oh what a lovely poem Flo, so good to see that they have eyes for each other after all. I was beginning to think it was a bit one sided till I read the last verse.Takes the phrase "Love is Blind" to a new level, I guess.....Maria xxx
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Date: 5/3/2018 2:03:00 PM
Lol nope, it's both sided :p I am very happy you like it Maria!
Date: 5/2/2018 9:22:00 AM
What a wonderful poem. The visuals were so clear in my mind I could see them. Very dream like. Love it very much. Well done. Hope you are keeping well. Yes, I'm still crazy as ever my friend. Thank you for your comment on Man flu. best wishes. Pete. tygertyger.
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:02:00 AM
Pete! Good morning you! Thank you for the lovely comment and the visit :) I'm glad to 'see' you :p
Date: 5/2/2018 7:19:00 AM
She, the apple of his eye..he, the joy of her heart..beautiful write Flo
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/2/2018 10:00:00 AM
Exactly :) Thanks Joseph.
Date: 5/1/2018 5:37:00 PM
What a lovely poem of love without words. It is in the eyes !! You have captured what I have seen in the very special couples who have been blessed with true-love ! Nicely done!
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/2/2018 9:59:00 AM
Carrie I hope you've seen it a lot; it seems a rarity today. Thank you Carrie :)
Date: 5/1/2018 4:56:00 PM
Flo... this is an absolutely beautiful sweet friend! I am so happy that I dropped by!!! Love to you dearest Flo!!! Happy Jack XOXO
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/1/2018 5:03:00 PM
Love right back atcha my dear friend ;•* thank you Jack
Date: 5/1/2018 4:33:00 PM
So glad you dropped by FJ, I'd of probably not got to read your beautiful poem, thank you for your visit. Mick
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/1/2018 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Mick :)
Date: 5/1/2018 12:22:00 PM
Beautifully done, Flow, the imagery well done, the flow is wonderful.. as always your talent shines... Hugs
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FJ Thomas
Date: 5/1/2018 4:13:00 PM
Thanks so much my dear Eve :)
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