Audrey Haick Poet Alliteration

Unspeakable Love

No one knows the higher heights to which their love had climbed
Or how their simultaneous thoughts, fluidly flow
Required replies to queries crisscross  from minds in sync
And countless compliments and sweet gentle gestures, he lays upon her heart
Popular redundant rhetoric, now unnecessary is made extinct by…unspeakable love 

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For:  Adeleke's "Unspeakable Love" Contest

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Jancarl Campi February 19, 2011 at 9:49 AM Thanks for your comment on my poem. Perhaps it was in the deep thoughts of my mind this poem came to life. Sometimes my pen moves by itself. I liked "Unspeakable Love" may you do well in the contest. Jancarl

George Aul February 19, 2011 at 9:11 AM A very good write for the contest...good luck........George

Wilma Neels February 18, 2011 at 2:08 PM Hey there Annalise, I love your entry for Adeleke's contest, wishing you all the best and enjoy the weekend ahead :) love Wilma

Charles Melody Lightning Ink February 18, 2011 at 7:34 AM a great depiction of genuine love, keep on the meaningful writing.

Sara Kendrick February 18, 2011 at 7:29 AM Good luck in the contest with this interesting work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Constance La France February 18, 2011 at 5:30 AM A beautiful written by a beutiful soul, best of luck in the contest~~

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 9:53 PM the last line was full of wisdom. Rhetoric is so unnecessary in love! good luck with your entry in this contest.

Robert Pettit February 17, 2011 at 4:33 PM I believe Adeleke will like this entry in her contest. It is decently written.