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Unseen Rainbow

I've never ever seen her face, but in my mind, she's the color of love Black strong like dark coffee She wakes you up early in the morning, gives you an energetic taste of loving to get your day going Red passionate fire flows in her veins She's got crimson lips that blow words of desire, to keep the flames rising higher and higher, every time she speaks your name Yellow smile is sunshine bright She walk towards you in her canary-colored, polka dot sun dress that accentuate her hips so well Her graceful charm is so a-maize-ingly pastel Blue mood indigo can really touch you She makes you want to love her always, under ocean lit moonlight and clear cerulean skies Embark on a passage of endless days Green verdant valley of iris flower eyes She's as a carpet of grass with enfolding arms, wrapping you in her love Bury your head in her bosom, safe from harm Brown sugar is the sweetest heart ever known She has a boundless supply of caramel happiness, taste the creamy richness of her sensuality It's like roasted chestnuts offered to a welcomed guest White visions of a streaming, silky satin dress She has a winter glow like pure virgin snow, a gift waiting to be opened by a worthy beau Beckons you into her ivory tower to rest Forever gazing into her yet unseen face, which in my mind is the color of love

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Date: 7/10/2020 10:10:00 PM
Freddie, So nice a feast in bright shades of love. You cast a spell in words that needs no applause. But I will, and do just the same. -Richard
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Date: 5/9/2020 9:02:00 AM
What a Wonder you Twinkling in the lines Of poetry Reality Embellished In sensuality Facilitates!!!!! FRJ Well pen!
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Date: 1/14/2017 9:42:00 AM
Lovely very romantic smooth poem!
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Date: 1/10/2017 12:16:00 AM
This is top class Freddie! Notwithstanding the excellent use of colours, the images are really fantastically interwoven. A very clever write and completely different from the normal humdrum. Its sensual and artistic.
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Date: 1/7/2017 8:09:00 AM
Love the way you weave the colours into each verse, a delight to read. No wonder this was POTD. Ciao.
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Date: 1/5/2017 4:04:00 PM
Great poem, Freddie...A real joy to read! All the very best for your New Year...May it be a fulfilling and contented one. My regards. :) john
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Date: 1/5/2017 9:51:00 AM
TIS WONDERFUL THE WAY YOU CREATEV AND POST YOUR VERSES! Solid gold and a pleasure to read. A7! ADDING TO MY FAV LIST...
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Date: 12/18/2016 9:20:00 PM
Hello Freddie, Congratulations on the POTD here!! The verses of "Unseen Rainbow" weave a tapestry of poetic art here for sure. Extraordinary Work!! A FAV in my book, Sir!! Merry Chrismas, Gary
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Date: 12/15/2016 11:58:00 PM
This beautiful poem is amazing in thought and picturisation:) love so well expressed, Freddie:) congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 12/15/2016 9:43:00 PM
Brilliant thought is represented in the form of a sweet, salty and tasty poetry. Very entertaining. Loved it. Congratulation for POTD. A big 7 from me................//hugs.
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Date: 12/15/2016 5:18:00 PM
Very beautiful Freddie many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/15/2016 1:24:00 PM
Congrats my friend on the POTD!
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Date: 12/15/2016 12:07:00 PM
Beautiful... inviting colors of a woman!
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Date: 12/15/2016 11:51:00 AM
Freddie, what a sweet talker you are:) With precision strokes, you have painted a masterpiece. It now hangs squarely in the mind:) Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/15/2016 10:40:00 AM
Such beauty! I think it will make all women wish they were a rainbow.
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Date: 12/15/2016 7:35:00 AM
- Beautiful poem :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Freddie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/15/2016 7:03:00 AM
Very well done. And congrats on poet of the day.
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Date: 12/15/2016 7:00:00 AM
I love this one. Such a good use of the color theme. I've never read one quite like this. Congrats on poem of the day. Well deserved my friend. Janet
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Date: 12/15/2016 6:41:00 AM
Loved your form, congratulations Freddie for POTD honors...
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Date: 12/15/2016 5:30:00 AM
You paint a picture with such awe-inspiring broad strokes, simply lovely Freddie! Congratulations, aptly merited.
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Date: 12/15/2016 5:25:00 AM
Tenderly passionate... Just beautiful, I tell you! And congratulations on a well deserve potd :)
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Date: 12/15/2016 3:35:00 AM
Hey Freddie, It's no surprise that this lovely and well written piece got such an honor. I'm sooo happy for you my friend. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day! It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/15/2016 1:59:00 AM
Awesome poem, RW, and congrats for POTD
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:01:00 PM
WOW! Freddie you have painted such a beautiful portrait of love and adoration. It is truly a work of art penned with passion and sincerity. Very, very well done good sir.
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Date: 12/14/2016 10:01:00 AM
Inspired! Freddie, a great ride across the pleasure boundaries that exist in the human mind - we're hard-wired to like color. (And I see you didn't use purple or orange - well, no wonder, because almost nothing rhymes with them.) :P
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