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Unseen Beauty (Haiku Series)

I've never seen Her She refreshes me Imperceptible Even with the trees waving: I see naught when she is here Unseen to the naked eye Rippling the waters On hot afternoons Waltzing among us When the Eagles soar Helps the Honeybee The Unseen Beauty She is there to help guide them Pollinating the Flowers Is all around;for SHE is Enhancing their flight With her unseen Breath The Zephyrus Wind Entered in Deborah Guzzi Contest The Beauty Way Entered in Christie Moses Contest The Many Voices Of The Wind

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Date: 2/8/2012 6:28:00 PM
Excellent set of haikus filled with dreamy imagery. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:29:00 PM
so how did you do in this contest. I bet you got top honors. Lovely imagery on Zephyr!
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Date: 1/27/2009 3:56:00 PM
True to form, about Nature, the "she " is Nature, or if the "she is human then it would be Synru. Beautiful pictures painted. Thanks for sharing. Judy Riley
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Date: 1/22/2009 8:10:00 AM
HGarvey - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Debbie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/9/2009 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations dear, sweet brother on your well deserved success in the Beauty Way contest! It is no surprise to me at all, as your are one amazing poet! I am so behind today on my comments, but I had to write to congratulate you and to thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments. I will catch up with your others soon. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 1/9/2009 7:06:00 AM
Excellent and creative form of poetry! Well done and well deserved to win. Congratulations!K ~Carrie
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Date: 1/9/2009 12:14:00 AM
HG, congratulations on your well deserved Win in Debbie's inspiring contest. Best wishes, Nigel
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Date: 1/8/2009 11:51:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest HG.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/28/2008 3:25:00 AM
Nice haiku series, thanks for commenting on my work.
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Date: 12/23/2008 8:23:00 AM
Excellent...using multiple haiku in this beautiful way! ~ Great job!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/22/2008 7:25:00 PM
Absolutely each one is beauty. Too Wonderful! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/22/2008 1:45:00 PM
This is just terrific, good luck in the contests. See, you are not a h-a poet. BG Xliamp
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