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A Bengal tiger has an uncanny hunch That he'll encounter a tasty beast to munch Finding an inedible Prey with fear he roars go away! Then runs to seek a more suitable lunch

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Date: 7/23/2024 4:53:00 PM
Robert, I can't help equating the donkey with democrats. I think the donkey just did something really smart and clever.
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/23/2024 6:03:00 PM
I suppose my limerick is indicative of Democrats. These days Hulk Hogan is indicative of the Maga Republicans.
Date: 7/14/2024 7:05:00 PM
Gourmet Donkey not a treat, Bengal tiger must find something else to eat! Clever, creative and made me smile and sigh! hugs,~Anaya
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/18/2024 12:31:00 PM
I'm glad you are a fan of an ironic twist. My best, Robert
Date: 7/12/2024 12:36:00 PM
Aww that is so sweet and cleverly worded Robert! Enjoyed…Debx
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/13/2024 12:29:00 PM
No I'm from Los Angeles, but I'm kinda a wannabe because as a boy, one of my idols was the great Olympic gold medalist Ron Clark from Perth. Robert
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Date: 7/12/2024 3:58:00 PM
Hey Robert….are you an Aussie? I didn’t know that! Do you live in the USA? Where in Oz are you from? Im from Perth…..Debx
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Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/12/2024 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, always good to hear from my Aussie compadre. Cheers, Robert

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