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When I was a young mother a voice in my head told me I had to take a library book back.

That minute.

It was an urgent voice, an urgent feeling.

I did not want to, but the voice would not leave me alone.

When I reached the library there were 17 scared young teenage girls from out of town, who were lost.  They had walked away from the mall where their buses and chaperones were, and then it got dark, and none of them remembered which direction they had come from.

I was a woman alone, so they were not afraid to get in the car with me,

and I was driving the biggest station wagon ever invented, so they all fit.

I drove them back to the mall where some worried chaperons and an empty

bus was waiting.

I honked the horn all the way up that driveway.

Joy all around, thanks to spirit.

I was way too tired to listen, but spirit will keep insisting until the only thing

you can do is listen. That was 36 years ago, and I still smile when I think of it.

 

Take that library book back NOW! Spirit demanded. I was a young mother, and tired to the bone. So I asked my husband to do what spirit commanded. He laughed, as he was in his Lazy-Boy home. My mind was so bombarded and pestered by spirit, I grabbed my purse, the book, and my car key. As I came to the library, even came near it, I saw there was trouble, only solvable by me. Date: 11-19-2018 Contest: Unrest of Spirit Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Date: 11/19/2018 2:35:00 PM
That is an incredible story Caren, you have a truly intuitive soul. Good luck my friend. Kindest thoughts Ann x
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/19/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thank you Ann. I think they know "who will finally give in?" and I am a reluctant pigeon, who knows better than to fight long now.
Date: 11/19/2018 9:26:00 AM
Great story my friend...you are a kindred soul... the Angels are smiling too...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 11/19/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Winged Warrior. I have never forgotten those terrified small-town girls, who had been praying for someone with a big car to come along. They had been in town for the annual Girl's basketball tournament. Playing in a park, across from the library, not one of them remembered which direction from which they had walked.
Date: 11/19/2018 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful story... this is a great reminder to listen to that "little voice"! ;)
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Date: 11/19/2018 10:23:00 AM
The voice would not let up. I am sure if my 6 foot three 312 pound husband would have turned up, they would have been terrified to get in the car, so it had to be me. He is a pussy cat, but they would not have known that.
Date: 11/19/2018 7:12:00 AM
Oh, yes!I see mein this poem too! At least regarding the library...since I work there, I can always bring my books back on time. No use being embarrassed :)
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Date: 11/19/2018 10:24:00 AM
Hahaha I was way too exhausted to take that book back after bathing three little girls and sitting down for the first time in two hours. Wanted to sit and read a book, not take that book back. Willing to pay the fine, but the voice hounded me.
Date: 11/19/2018 6:42:00 AM
It happens all the time...you acted on it...for the benefit of others unknowingly... such is life...Nice message...All the best Caren
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Date: 11/19/2018 10:25:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. I have heard the voice yell STOP too, when there was no reason, and you can bet your top dollar, I stop. It has saved my life more than once.

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