Shane Solomon Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Unraveled the Sundress Poem Contest

It was the beginning of a summery season,
In that beautiful dress, adorned with baby blue and pink
Opened back, opened toe sandals; she gave me a wink
That sundress took my breath away, I wanted to say "hello" but lacked  a reason




                                                                        By: Shane Solomon

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James Fraser April 9, 2011 at 6:01 AM Congratulation's on your fine win Shane in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

Joyce Johnson April 4, 2011 at 1:44 PM How about the wink as a reason? Cute poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kash Poet April 4, 2011 at 7:42 AM Congrats Shane on your win with this beautiful poem---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 6:42 AM Congratulations on your win Shane in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud April 3, 2011 at 11:42 PM short but swell, shane.. CONRATS for winning real well :) hugggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 3, 2011 at 6:34 PM She really must have looked stunning in that sundress, I sure hope that you got you found another reason to say hello-- this is sweet-- congrats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 3, 2011 at 6:20 PM ongratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, shane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 3, 2011 at 5:59 PM Congrats shane on your wonderful winning poem in the sundress contest luv.. an awesome piece.. enjoy with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta March 25, 2011 at 1:29 PM Nicely read the picture and interpreted equally well with humor, shane

Constance La France March 25, 2011 at 8:05 AM Thank you for supporting my contest.