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Unraveled the Sundress Poem Contest

It was the beginning of a summery season, In that beautiful dress, adorned with baby blue and pink Opened back, opened toe sandals; she gave me a wink That sundress took my breath away, I wanted to say "hello" but lacked a reason By: Shane Solomon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/9/2011 6:01:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Shane in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:44:00 PM
How about the wink as a reason? Cute poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/4/2011 7:42:00 AM
Congrats Shane on your win with this beautiful poem---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Shane in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:42:00 PM
short but swell, shane.. CONRATS for winning real well :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:34:00 PM
She really must have looked stunning in that sundress, I sure hope that you got you found another reason to say hello-- this is sweet-- congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:20:00 PM
ongratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, shane
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:59:00 PM
Congrats shane on your wonderful winning poem in the sundress contest luv.. an awesome piece.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/25/2011 1:29:00 PM
Nicely read the picture and interpreted equally well with humor, shane
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Date: 3/25/2011 8:05:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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