Unravel

“Ramana queried, ‘who am I’ ~ If we know not, our life’s a lie” ~ quote by poet Of all mysteries in the universe vast, the one of highest relevance in our life role, is to find out who we are, before we breathe our last. All scriptures without exception affirm we are a soul but how may we believe, unless we clearly see, by unravelling this truth, mystics extol? In bondage to desires, we are not free and moreover transient is joy, lingering is pain and we stand not erect, until head and heart agree. Enslaved by cravings of ego, all our efforts are in vain, for we see not the light, said to be aflame within; our life wasted, measuring material gain. Religion terrifies us, speaking of man’s sin, a condemnation that in heart does not ring true, so if we discard holy books, how then are we to begin? Noticing fearsome fears and dark desires stick like glue, these spiralling apparitions are fed by our mind, thoughts which we unendingly renew. Silence sets us free from ego’s bind, wherein, in stillness, we feel pristine presence stir and in timeless time, we’re graced by divine caress kind. When formless awareness chooses with love to concur, we distinctly feel polarities within heart merge; boundaries between God and us blur. Beholding living light from within emerge, we know without being told, this is our true essence, definitive wisdom graced by God if our heart we first purge. Let light of Self burst forth as a sublime effervescence For this oh worthy hermit, is our quintessence

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Date: 8/16/2023 10:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win .. beautiful poem ... and a lovey quote too, U.S. :) - hugs
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Date: 8/15/2023 10:21:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your win with this poem that speaks so eloquently of the journey of the soul, shedding "the bondage of desires" so we can be free to become!! "Let light of Self burst forth" indeed. Let our light shine so we may be beacons in the darkness and a light on a hilltop! Gratitude for this beautiful poem and blessings of light to you as you share your journey with us in poetry as you explore and accept your own uniqueness like unraveling a knot!
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Date: 8/15/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Sam. The truth is simple, thought complicates it.
Date: 8/14/2023 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Unravel" is a wonderful write/quote. It was a joy to read. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/14/2023 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, Paula
Date: 8/14/2023 6:47:00 AM
As fine example of how to live in God’s glory US, a wonderful poem that shows one the way to unravel fears of past wrongdoings on the road travelled. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 8/14/2023 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, Belle
Date: 8/13/2023 2:37:00 PM
Very well done for a number one win. This part has always been such a puzzle for me because I can't accept the fire and brimstone definition of hell, yet other parts of the Bible ring true: a condemnation that in heart does not ring true, so if we discard holy books, how then are we to begin?
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Date: 8/13/2023 5:04:00 PM
In my view, all scriptures are directional indicators and so, are best taken as metaphorical, to discover the truth, within. As Bruce Lee said, ‘it’s like a finger pointing to the moon ~ don’t look at the finger, otherwise you’ll miss all that heavenly glory’
Date: 8/10/2023 6:36:00 PM
...."silence sets us free....in timeless time ....a formless awareness chooses love.... within emerging.....wisdom...as sublime" ....nice that seeing can be to under-stand and fix a problems found-day-shuns...... stan
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Date: 8/10/2023 7:22:00 PM
yes, once we know who we are by seeing directly, inner conflict ends and we remain tranquil and equanimous at almost all times. to see, identity must recede, which is enabled in silence.
Date: 8/10/2023 3:21:00 PM
Another FAV from the pen of the Unseeking Seeker. There seems to be less to seek, reading of all that you have found, my wise friend. Beautiful wording in this mindful and encouraging poem, Unseeking Seeker. I have to pace myself with your poetry less I become overwhelmed. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/10/2023 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, Bill. I’m happy these words resonate. It is simple ~ we are in the physical, so God too must be here, within. He is. Silence and stillness lets us feel bliss magnetism, in the waking state. When identity recedes, we see who we are, which is living light veiled by ego.
Date: 8/10/2023 10:28:00 AM
Nice poem. Makes me think why I am here,
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Date: 8/10/2023 7:13:00 PM
Happy you, enjoyed, Jay
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