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Unplugged Slug

An orange Tesla that was bought by Scott Ran out of go juice right there on the spot Then was quickly passed By a Pacer, gassed And AMC car shaped like a kumquat

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2023 8:16:00 PM

Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write again. Have a great/fun day writing away...............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/5/2023 6:54:00 AM

LOL. I quite like this one David. Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/3/2023 4:57:00 PM

David, a cute one, congratulations on your winning placement!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/29/2023 2:45:00 PM

New and fancy is not always better. Good one, David. Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/29/2023 9:40:00 AM

A creative/fun Limerick write. A fun read. Have a fun/great day.............

Deb M

Date: 8/28/2023 11:48:00 PM

Ha fun poem David! Enjoyed…Debx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2023 1:45:00 AM

An AMC shaped like a kumquat. Now that would be a sight to see. Good one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/24/2023 9:13:00 PM

Lol…They must remember to carry a charger at all times, like we do with cellphone. Lol. Oh good one, David :)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/24/2023 4:13:00 PM

Loved your Limerick, David. Your finish made me laugh out loud. (as it should). Excellent poetry, my friend. Write On! Bill

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/23/2023 5:20:00 PM

Good one my friend. I guess I don't understand why people get electric cars. You pay twice as much for something that has to return home every night to be recharged.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/23/2023 1:55:00 PM

Excellent one, David. Hmm, shaped like a kumquat! How do obese people get into those! Ps… Am not for any electric cars.. They are in the boondoggle of COVID shots, and useless masks forced on frightened Americans by Albert Einstein in rhe White House.. Otherwise known as Mr. Compassionate in Maui! Pangie …Rebel with a Cause