Unplugged Slug

An orange Tesla that was bought by Scott
Ran out of go juice right there on the spot
Then was quickly passed
By a Pacer, gassed
And AMC car shaped like a kumquat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading your fun Limerick write again. Have a great/fun day writing away...............
Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:54 AM
LOL. I quite like this one David. Congratulations! :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 4:57 PM
David, a cute one, congratulations on your winning placement!
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 2:45 PM
New and fancy is not always better. Good one, David. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 9:40 AM
A creative/fun Limerick write. A fun read. Have a fun/great day.............
M  Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:48 PM
Ha fun poem David! Enjoyed…Debx
Kendrick Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 1:45 AM
An AMC shaped like a kumquat. Now that would be a sight to see. Good one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Downing  Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 9:13 PM
Lol…They must remember to carry a charger at all times, like we do with cellphone. Lol. Oh good one, David :)
Baker Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 4:13 PM
Loved your Limerick, David. Your finish made me laugh out loud. (as it should). Excellent poetry, my friend. Write On! Bill
Brotherton Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:20 PM
Good one my friend. I guess I don't understand why people get electric cars. You pay twice as much for something that has to return home every night to be recharged.
Romios Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Excellent one, David. Hmm, shaped like a kumquat! How do obese people get into those! Ps… Am not for any electric cars.. They are in the boondoggle of COVID shots, and useless masks forced on frightened Americans by Albert Einstein in rhe White House.. Otherwise known as Mr. Compassionate in Maui! Pangie …Rebel with a Cause
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