Unnoticed

Not happy anymore just feeling down Never wearing a smile just a constant frown. No one knocks the door or calls me on the phone I’m sad and invisible being on my own. All my life is getting up in the morning then going back to bed Ho what a sad existence I might as well be dead. When I was young I had fun staying out with my mate Partying and have fun staying out late. That was long ago and years flown so fast The happiness I once had was never meant to last. in my secluded house I will waste my life away Alone and unnoticed is the way I will stay

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Deb M

Date: 1/14/2025 3:09:00 PM

Paul your poems make me very sad….l admire your realness, honesty and truth and for being vulnerable with your feelings. Is there anything you could do to change this…join a group of some sort or perhaps reach out to friends from past? There are so many linely people in this world…. I know its not easy Paul! Debx

Jacqueline Elston

Date: 12/15/2024 5:49:00 AM

l noticed your poem and its very good. it reminded me of yesterday when l managed to get into my garden and found just one tiny flower stretching above all my neglected weeds .l dont remember planting it but there it was standing out. l was going to pick it but thought l'd leave so l can look for it again tomorrow. J.