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Unknown Thoughts

I know what's there I know what's not I know what I thought My thoughts were wrong I thought you would always be there And now it's all gone Now it's in the hands Of another soulmate by choice I hope it to be happy Souls to be joined and Last through eternity In my hands that it shall Never be as happy as it should always be If only you made the right choice And stayed in my hands, Happy we would be and Never have sorrow through the hands of another.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/5/2009 2:29:00 AM
Hi Melinda Nice poem. Lots to reflect on in this work. hoping to read some more of your poems in the near future. M
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Date: 7/4/2009 1:31:00 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem regarding "Unknown Thoughts." Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:35:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Melinda. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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