Unknown

What I see on her face is unknown
a faraway stare with no emotion
as coldness drips from the eyes I've known
they unmask her heart's growing erosion
this day of crumbling comes with no tears
only a reality that's silent
as no one has spoken and no one hears
when treasured days of joy turn to lament
to leave me alone in shadows of dark
where my hands are cupped to hold an empty space
with a pain so deep it will leave a mark
in lonely nights I will never embrace
these hours of sorrow with pictures I own
will leave me with all the memories I've sown


4/16/23
contest Writing Challenge "U" words
sponsor Constance La France
"Unkown"
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Agustin Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 7:29 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic... especially by your last lines: "these hours of sorrow with pictures I own will leave me with all the memories I've sown." By the way, please check the spelling of your Title... God bless you.
Y. Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 8:55 AM
Hi Frederic, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
La France Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Frederic, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Beautiful and I love the music !
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2023 at 2:07 AM
- Congratulations :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 8:36 PM
"these hours of sorrow with pictures I own will leave me with all the memories I've sown" - A very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Fowler Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 6:35 PM
Sad write Frederic, but with sweet memories off love lost. Congratulations on your win! :)
Peck Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 1:57 PM
This is so sad but beautiful, Frederick. It is the sadness we feel when love fades, then leaves. Best of luck in contest.
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 12:10 PM
- "where my hands are cupped to hold an empty space with a pain so deep it will leave a mark" .. . beautiful ... but so sad - Best wishes in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs
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