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What I see on her face is unknown a faraway stare with no emotion as coldness drips from the eyes I've known they unmask her heart's growing erosion this day of crumbling comes with no tears only a reality that's silent as no one has spoken and no one hears when treasured days of joy turn to lament to leave me alone in shadows of dark where my hands are cupped to hold an empty space with a pain so deep it will leave a mark in lonely nights I will never embrace these hours of sorrow with pictures I own will leave me with all the memories I've sown 4/16/23 contest Writing Challenge "U" words sponsor Constance La France "Unkown"

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Date: 4/20/2023 7:29:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic... especially by your last lines: "these hours of sorrow with pictures I own will leave me with all the memories I've sown." By the way, please check the spelling of your Title... God bless you.
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Date: 4/19/2023 8:55:00 AM
Hi Frederic, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/19/2023 6:07:00 AM
Frederic, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Beautiful and I love the music !
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Date: 4/19/2023 2:07:00 AM
- Congratulations :) - hugs
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Date: 4/18/2023 8:36:00 PM
"these hours of sorrow with pictures I own will leave me with all the memories I've sown" - A very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/18/2023 6:35:00 PM
Sad write Frederic, but with sweet memories off love lost. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/16/2023 1:57:00 PM
This is so sad but beautiful, Frederick. It is the sadness we feel when love fades, then leaves. Best of luck in contest.
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Date: 4/16/2023 12:10:00 PM
- "where my hands are cupped to hold an empty space with a pain so deep it will leave a mark" .. . beautiful ... but so sad - Best wishes in the contest, Frederic :) - hugs
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