Lisa Ricci Poet Light Verse

Unkissed Rose

I wanted to post one more small entry
I will be responding to any and all comments
have a wonderful night and weekend too
thank you

"unkissed rose"

an unkissed rose has no life
such is cold and passionless
a stem without touch
a petal without fragrance
a flower without love

nurture the rose to breathe
and let desires play out
return the stem to feel
return the leaf to perfume
return the butterfly whole

affections and sensations
such is life of a kissed rose

SkyWatcher
10-21-23

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Bill Baker October 28, 2023 at 4:42 PM A rosey way to say, we all need Love (and kisses are nice too) to feel alive and be our best. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your lovely poetry, Lisa. May your weekend be filled with pleasing thoughts and the peace of knowing you're loved. Love ya, Bill & Sara Lisa Ricci October 30, 2023 at 3:57 PM Hi Bill. Thank you Thank you. Yes, life should be of affections and sensations for all to feel alive. What can I say (smile lol) Your commentary Bill is so generous to which I do not take for granted. Thank you. May you and Sara have a wonderful night. Peace and Blessings always to you both. (smile) PS - I'm so sorry I've been late responding to your beautiful and generous reviews and commentary...

Victor Buhagiar October 23, 2023 at 9:30 AM Romance with a capital R. You have great imagination. For what is a rose without perfume? Blessings. Lisa Ricci October 23, 2023 at 2:46 PM Why thank you once again Victor. Truly. Your review is most generous. Blessings back to you. Have a wonderful night.

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2023 at 3:16 PM wow, that was so lovely. Awesome metaphor. I always enjoy rose poems. Lisa Ricci October 22, 2023 at 3:45 AM Hi Andrea. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much. I'm honored by your commentary and I do not take it for granted. Truly. I will see you soon on your page. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always (smile)

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2023 at 3:15 PM thanks for your beautiful comment on my poem. let me read yours now. Lisa Ricci October 22, 2023 at 3:43 AM Good Morning Andrea. Hi. You are most welcome. I know its been a very busy year for you and your family. May today be a good day in every way. Blessings always (smile)

Mark Hughes October 21, 2023 at 11:36 AM Very nice Lisa!! It speaks to me of a likeness to a poem I wrote called "Mistreated" Lisa Ricci October 22, 2023 at 3:38 AM Good Morning Mark. Thank you very much. I am appreciative if this entry spoke to you. Truly. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page soon. Take Care (smile)