Unkempt Moments

Not sure how it happens
But love can get a bit disheveled
Unkempt moments, untidy interactions.
Perhaps it becomes like an old flannel shirt
Worn, wrinkled, frayed at the collar
Yet still so comfortable
We overlook its appearance.

Remember when her eyes….
Those faded blue orbs
Swallowed your every thought
Eased your very soul
Calmed your apprehension?

Go, stand again on the edge
Gaze into them anew
Whisper cross time’s worn flannel
Those worn, wrinkled and frayed words
Of love’s disheveled longings.


John G. Lawless
©11/22/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Peck Avatar
November 23, 2022 at 4:39 PM
Your poem is beautiful, John. ~worn, wrinkled and frayed words~
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace