Universe

She made a wish on a falling star As it blazed by in a fiery streak It was quite a sight to see As Luna was reaching its peak She stood there, just a speck, in a vast universe Gazing at those twinkles on high So many wonders to contemplate and in her awe she let out a sigh So many thoughts whirled through her mind As her curiousity began to grow Another falling star whizzed by And left the sky all aglow 4-17-2023 Contest: Writing Challenge - 'U' Words Sponsor: Constance La France

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2023 12:30:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win ... a great poem, Joseph :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2023 9:33:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 4/19/2023 6:37:00 AM

Joseph, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! Wonderful !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/18/2023 9:02:00 PM

Indeed, the universe is a very beautiful feeling. A great poem. Congratulations!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/18/2023 8:01:00 PM

"She stood there, just a speck in a vast universe, and let out a sigh." Such a tender thought. I understand this feeling completely. We *are* a tiny speck in the universe. It's awe inspiring, indeed. Your thoughts are beautiful and magical, all at the same time. Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy