Universe

She made a wish on a falling star
 As it blazed by in a fiery streak
 It was quite a sight to see
 As Luna was reaching its peak

 She stood there, just a speck, in a vast universe
 Gazing at those twinkles on high
 So many wonders to contemplate
 and in her awe she let out a sigh

 So many thoughts whirled through her mind
 As her curiousity began to grow
 Another falling star whizzed by
 And left the sky all aglow

 4-17-2023
 Contest: Writing Challenge - 'U' Words
 Sponsor:  Constance La France

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2023 12:30:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win ... a great poem, Joseph :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2023 9:33:00 AM

Hi Joseph, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 4/19/2023 6:37:00 AM

Joseph, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! Wonderful !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/18/2023 9:02:00 PM

Indeed, the universe is a very beautiful feeling. A great poem. Congratulations!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/18/2023 8:01:00 PM

"She stood there, just a speck in a vast universe, and let out a sigh." Such a tender thought. I understand this feeling completely. We *are* a tiny speck in the universe. It's awe inspiring, indeed. Your thoughts are beautiful and magical, all at the same time. Congratulations on your win in the contest, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy