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United Prayer

United Prayer Painted in a corner Smeared about the floor Chants of lone forgiveness Quiet in the war “Deafening the sound of death” Garden roses trampled Broken stems abound Wilting on the visions Blooming losses found “Petals of peace scattered carelessly” Blood along the pathway Eyes hid in the mist Penning someone else’s name On this lengthy list “Alphabetical to the grave” Standing from the shadows Crossing battle lines Reaching for the freedom Voices loud can find “Speak up children, your voices matter” Put aside your weapons Time has come to cease The nation now has gathered United prayer for peace “On our hands and knees we pray… bring an end to war this day” I was asked to write a poetic prayer for peace by a young friend in the Middle East. This is what I wrote.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/17/2017 2:03:00 PM
I have a close friend of mine from the middle east,an amazing poetess too -Eileen Ghali Manassian.I know the sufferings there...I just wish there'll be an ending..so they can enjoy their lands in peace.Im tpuched.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Charmaine. It is sad what some have to endure. I keep hope to see peace in my lifetime but I don't think that will be. I appreciate your visit today.
Date: 1/16/2017 5:49:00 PM
You did a beautiful job, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/17/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Kim, so very much.
Date: 1/16/2017 4:14:00 PM
Hi Chris, You came up with an amazing prayer.This type of prayer is a prayer close to my heart. My prayer is this prayer is answered. Well done my friend. A without a doubt seven and fav:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend. I am happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 1/16/2017 4:11:00 PM
Such a powerful poem made even more powerful by your skillful use of imagery. This is a truly excellent poem, Chris. We should all be praying for peace everyday.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 4:26:00 PM
Thanks so very much Christy for your always kind words.
Date: 1/16/2017 3:18:00 PM
I'm from Egypt. A prayer to unite is very welcome. ... This is touching. Thank you.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/16/2017 4:25:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.

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