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Streaming down an untouched mountain side an innocent river tumbles to freedom in a picturesque paradise graceful green pines brush the climbing mountain side, standing proud in Gods grace as they sway in a blissful August breeze I slip down a beautiful ravine into a moss covered fortress an opening in the dense foliage reveals a bald eagle searching the basin for life a realization engulfs my spirit soul , a special love , a beauty a song of grandeur echoes free.........

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Date: 6/14/2010 3:08:00 PM
Rick, you are a natural for writing nature poems. You have written a poem that is superb in its creativity, passion, and imagery. Simply powerful.
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:53:00 AM
This paints a beautiful image..I just love the mountains, pines...nature has blessed us with such beauty...Good luck in the contest! Emily
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:41:00 PM
good luck in the contes, have an awesome day, or whats left of it,..p.d.
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