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Is The Fashion World Finally Getting Diversity?

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Unique

*Image of Fashions by EL. Unique I heard, exaggerations, so to speak, Of where in the world their clothes ware is chic, In India it's awesome said a Sikh, Free-flowing sari so graceful and meek, On Java, fabric prints known as batik, Smooth Indonesians make profits they eke, When in Afghanistan argued Derrick, They wear burqas, fear not being *fasiq, Changed from animal-skin times, that's unique. 2022 November 02 *1st Place* Writing Challenge - Unburden a ''U'' Word ~~Constance La France: Judged 2022 November 12 *fasiq; an Islamic lawbreaker, a sinner.
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Kauffman Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 12:55 PM
The inner fabric of this poem is truly "unique" William! What a wonderful take on the word "unique" - a fashion plate of wonderful designs and I love the last line! Congratulations. Mahalo for this delight! Blessings my dear friend! Leis of congratulations!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 7:13 PM
A welcoming weave of admiration, Sam, for I am truly pleased with your extended courtesies my friend. Enjoy your immediate days ahead, and, Hau'oli Ho'omaika'i, Aloha William
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on this great winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. I like your unique poem. Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Thank you, Sara, for I am genuinely pleased in your delight and praise my friend, Aloha William
La France Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:04 AM
Hilo, your poem is wonderful, I really like your words, image and audio and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 6:42 AM
I appreciate your expressions, Constance, and am pleased with my placement and to have been a part of your wonderful contest, and I hope to join in on your "V" form exciting challenge my friend, Aloha William
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Wonderful interpretation of the contest theme, congratulations
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Thanks, Terry, for your acknowledgment and laudation my friend, Aloha William
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:18 AM
I love this example, and I have to say, i am wondering if all the fine entries I am seeing in your contest have understood your directions. Don't we need to use nine different SPELLIngs of the same monorhyme?? Let me know in Soupmail if I got that wrong.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 8:07 AM
Soupmail sent.
Seeker Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 8:27 PM
Eloquently crafted. Enjoyed
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 11:00 PM
Thank you, US, for your words speak volumes my friend, Aloha William
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 1:25 PM
Very nicely done!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 1:38 PM
A hearty thanks, Kim, for your kind share my friend, Aloha William
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