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Is The Fashion World Finally Getting Diversity?

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*Image of Fashions by EL. Unique I heard, exaggerations, so to speak, Of where in the world their clothes ware is chic, In India it's awesome said a Sikh, Free-flowing sari so graceful and meek, On Java, fabric prints known as batik, Smooth Indonesians make profits they eke, When in Afghanistan argued Derrick, They wear burqas, fear not being *fasiq, Changed from animal-skin times, that's unique. 2022 November 02 *1st Place* Writing Challenge - Unburden a ''U'' Word ~~Constance La France: Judged 2022 November 12 *fasiq; an Islamic lawbreaker, a sinner.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/21/2022 12:55:00 PM

The inner fabric of this poem is truly "unique" William! What a wonderful take on the word "unique" - a fashion plate of wonderful designs and I love the last line! Congratulations. Mahalo for this delight! Blessings my dear friend! Leis of congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/21/2022 7:13:00 PM

A welcoming weave of admiration, Sam, for I am truly pleased with your extended courtesies my friend. Enjoy your immediate days ahead, and, Hau'oli Ho'omaika'i, Aloha William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2022 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations on this great winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. I like your unique poem. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/15/2022 8:53:00 AM

Thank you, Sara, for I am genuinely pleased in your delight and praise my friend, Aloha William

Constance La France

Date: 11/14/2022 6:04:00 AM

Hilo, your poem is wonderful, I really like your words, image and audio and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Unburden- A ''U'' Word, well done! I hope you will enter my new contest, Writing Challenge "V" Forms with quote inspirations and themes.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/14/2022 6:42:00 AM

I appreciate your expressions, Constance, and am pleased with my placement and to have been a part of your wonderful contest, and I hope to join in on your "V" form exciting challenge my friend, Aloha William

Terry Miller

Date: 11/13/2022 7:52:00 AM

Wonderful interpretation of the contest theme, congratulations

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2022 8:16:00 AM

Thanks, Terry, for your acknowledgment and laudation my friend, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2022 7:18:00 AM

I love this example, and I have to say, i am wondering if all the fine entries I am seeing in your contest have understood your directions. Don't we need to use nine different SPELLIngs of the same monorhyme?? Let me know in Soupmail if I got that wrong.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/6/2022 8:07:00 AM

Soupmail sent.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/2/2022 8:27:00 PM

Eloquently crafted. Enjoyed

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/2/2022 11:00:00 PM

Thank you, US, for your words speak volumes my friend, Aloha William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/2/2022 1:25:00 PM

Very nicely done!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/2/2022 1:38:00 PM

A hearty thanks, Kim, for your kind share my friend, Aloha William