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Unicorn

unique in appearance
ultra-long pointed horn
unction-powered, some say
uplifting, stands for hope
ubiquitous in myths
ultimate in mystique
unreal—or is it?

Copyright © Janice Canerdy | Year Posted 2023

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Terry Flood Date: 9/29/2023 5:13:00 PM Congrats, Janice. Any poem where the final line ‘or is it’ simply fits is okay in my book… or is it… yes! Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 9/28/2023 6:28:00 PM Nicely penned Pleiades poem, Janice! Congrats on your win! :) Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 9/28/2023 10:39:00 AM Janice, congratulations on your win! Your word choice is so fresh using exotic, out of the ordinary, "u" words. Nicely done! Blessings! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 9/27/2023 6:05:00 AM Congrats on your win Janice, Very nicely penned Login to Reply Janice Canerdy Date: 9/27/2023 10:50:00 AM Joseph, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win. I am thrilled! Janice

Christina Bowring Date: 9/22/2023 9:28:00 AM I love this poem Janice. Well written with carefully chosen words although it must be tricky. Unicorns are magical and you have captured this well. Really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. :) x Login to Reply Janice Canerdy Date: 9/22/2023 9:44:00 AM Thanks so much, Christina! This one was a challenge. Janice

Lin Lane Date: 9/22/2023 1:41:00 AM Very well written, Janice. Best of luck. I’m not sure if I’ll enter this one. There are so many great entries and none of the words are calling out, “choose me!” Login to Reply Janice Canerdy Date: 9/22/2023 6:07:00 AM This one was HARD for me! Thanks so much, Lin. Janice

Alexis Y. Date: 9/22/2023 12:42:00 AM Hi Janice, You did a great job with your chosen word. It's hard to find good “ u” words to write a poem, you did well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening;-) Alexis Login to Reply Janice Canerdy Date: 9/22/2023 6:06:00 AM This WAS a tough one. Thanks so much, Alexis! Janice