Unicorn

unique in appearance ultra-long pointed horn unction-powered, some say uplifting, stands for hope ubiquitous in myths ultimate in mystique unreal—or is it?

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Terry Flood

Date: 9/29/2023 5:13:00 PM

Congrats, Janice. Any poem where the final line ‘or is it’ simply fits is okay in my book… or is it… yes!

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/28/2023 6:28:00 PM

Nicely penned Pleiades poem, Janice! Congrats on your win! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2023 10:39:00 AM

Janice, congratulations on your win! Your word choice is so fresh using exotic, out of the ordinary, "u" words. Nicely done! Blessings!

Joseph May

Date: 9/27/2023 6:05:00 AM

Congrats on your win Janice, Very nicely penned

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/27/2023 10:50:00 AM

Joseph, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win. I am thrilled! Janice

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/22/2023 9:28:00 AM

I love this poem Janice. Well written with carefully chosen words although it must be tricky. Unicorns are magical and you have captured this well. Really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest. :) x

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2023 9:44:00 AM

Thanks so much, Christina! This one was a challenge. Janice

Lin Lane

Date: 9/22/2023 1:41:00 AM

Very well written, Janice. Best of luck. I’m not sure if I’ll enter this one. There are so many great entries and none of the words are calling out, “choose me!”

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2023 6:07:00 AM

This one was HARD for me! Thanks so much, Lin. Janice

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/22/2023 12:42:00 AM

Hi Janice, You did a great job with your chosen word. It's hard to find good “ u” words to write a poem, you did well. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good evening;-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/22/2023 6:06:00 AM

This WAS a tough one. Thanks so much, Alexis! Janice