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Date written: 02/01/2023

Unforgettable


               torrential rain 
               of t
                   e
                   a
                   r
                   s,
                    now dry;
         a pocketful of years 
             i wish
                    i could reclaim,
                d  r  i  f  t  e  d into oblivion,
                yet, it h   u   r   t   s 
                        to contemplate, still.
             though you've since 
                    blown your last goodnight kiss,
                you visit me
        time and time again, 
          for memories of you...
            are watered seeds
         in the garden soil 
                                of my mind,
             you perennially exist there 
                          as a peony
                        in full bloom,
           thriving past 
                 every season
                 It's where 
      I promise to keep you, Dad, 
                until my life 
                          is through.
                gone to glory
                        yet, you remain...
                                 unforgettable
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La France Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 3:42 PM
Edward, so emotional, it touched my heart deeply and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - C Words, well done, Constance
Ibeh Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 3:48 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback, visit and congratulations, Constance:) Most appreciated.
Peck Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your win, Edward! Your poem to your dad is beautiful.
Ibeh Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Thanks again, Ann:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story. Have a blessed day..............
Ibeh Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 1:23 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-)
Poet Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 4:13 PM
This is an absolutely stunning piece, Edward. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on your win.
Ibeh Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 1:24 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Lasaad:-)
Fowler Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Edward, your poems are filled with such beautiful imagery and it shines through wonderfully with this piece. Congratulations on your win! :)
Ibeh Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Thank you very much, Linda:-)
Kauffman Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Edward, as always I am struck by the intense beauty of your words in images - "memories of you are watered seeds," "a peony in full bloom" - just two in a garden of beautiful imagery flowers. Best wishes for the contest my friend. Blessings! Hope all is well.
Ibeh Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and lovely visit, Sam:-)
Peck Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 4:56 PM
Beautiful, Edward! Best of luck.
Ibeh Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 11:47 AM
Thank you very much, Ann:-)
Pandit Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Awesome. Loved this metaphoric poem--highly emotive. A FAVE for me.
Ibeh Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Thank you very much for the feedback and fave, Vijay:-)
Rees Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 8:26 AM
What lovely sentiments- so glad I read this to the end ! Well done.
Ibeh Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 10:40 AM
Thank you very much, Peter:-)
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