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snow covers my coveted garden, trees sigh and bare their leaves, unruffled evergreens stand tall, decked with shimmering ice-pellets crystallized on every branches, magnificent jewellery adorned! longingly wait for majestic spring when aquamarine horizon-rays with crimson hue, unfold a sublime picture of dawn, my senses are drowned in lilac dreams, and lost in a tender reverie tangerine! fragrant graceful flowers will wake me up, swirling all vibrant colours of rainbow in palette, playful spring-birds merrily cooing, saffron imagination dawns on my dreamy eyes. sun unleashes warmth, tulip-bulbs peek, bluebells scintillate, creatures waking from slumber… Unfold a harmonious cosmos! April 17, 2023 Writing Challenge - "U" words Poetry Contest Theme: Unfold Sponsor: Constance La France SECOND PLACE

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Date: 4/19/2023 12:27:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Mala - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 4/19/2023 9:31:00 AM
Hi Mala, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/19/2023 6:34:00 AM
Mala, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! Lovely !
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Date: 4/18/2023 8:58:00 PM
A very beautiful poem with a deep nature feeling and experience. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2023 5:42:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Friend. Truly appreciate.
Date: 4/18/2023 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Malabika. Nice poem
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2023 5:43:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet. Really appreciate your support.
Date: 4/18/2023 7:08:00 PM
Lovely imagery Mala. Congratulations your win! :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/19/2023 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Linda. Truly appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 4/18/2023 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day.................
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/18/2023 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Truly appreciate your comment.
Date: 4/18/2023 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your contest win, Mala. I liked the flow and rhythm, as well as your wonderful imagery.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/18/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Poet. Your inspiring comment is precious to me. Best wishes, always ~ Mala
Date: 4/17/2023 7:52:00 PM
so beautiful and colored poem, thanks
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/18/2023 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Poet, for your kind visit and lovely comment.

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