Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Free verse

Unfold

snow covers my coveted garden,
trees sigh and bare their leaves,
unruffled evergreens stand tall,
decked with shimmering ice-pellets
crystallized on every branches,
magnificent jewellery adorned!

longingly wait for majestic spring when
aquamarine horizon-rays with crimson hue,
unfold a sublime picture of dawn,
my senses are drowned in lilac dreams,
and lost in a tender reverie tangerine!

fragrant graceful flowers will wake me up,
swirling all vibrant colours of rainbow in palette,
playful spring-birds merrily cooing,
saffron imagination dawns on my dreamy eyes.
sun unleashes warmth, tulip-bulbs peek,
bluebells scintillate, creatures waking from slumber…
             
            Unfold a harmonious cosmos!


                           April 17, 2023
        Writing Challenge - "U" words Poetry Contest
                       Theme: Unfold
                Sponsor: Constance La France
                         SECOND PLACE

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Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2023 at 12:27 PM - A lovely poem, Mala - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Alexis Y. April 19, 2023 at 9:31 AM Hi Mala, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Constance La France April 19, 2023 at 6:34 AM Mala, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! Lovely !

Christuraj Alex April 18, 2023 at 8:58 PM A very beautiful poem with a deep nature feeling and experience. Congratulations! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 19, 2023 at 5:42 AM Thank you, Dear Friend. Truly appreciate.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris April 18, 2023 at 7:51 PM Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Malabika. Nice poem Malabika Ray Choudhury April 19, 2023 at 5:43 AM Thank you, Dear Poet. Really appreciate your support.

Linda Alice Fowler April 18, 2023 at 7:08 PM Lovely imagery Mala. Congratulations your win! :) Malabika Ray Choudhury April 19, 2023 at 5:44 AM Thank you, Dear Linda. Truly appreciate your kind comment.

Paula Goldsmith April 18, 2023 at 2:35 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day................. Malabika Ray Choudhury April 18, 2023 at 2:48 PM Thank you so much, Dear Paula. Truly appreciate your comment.

Sotto Poet April 18, 2023 at 1:26 PM Congratulations on your contest win, Mala. I liked the flow and rhythm, as well as your wonderful imagery. Malabika Ray Choudhury April 18, 2023 at 2:47 PM Thank you so much, Dear Poet. Your inspiring comment is precious to me. Best wishes, always ~ Mala

Yann Rolland April 17, 2023 at 7:52 PM so beautiful and colored poem, thanks Malabika Ray Choudhury April 18, 2023 at 10:14 AM Thank you, Dear Poet, for your kind visit and lovely comment.