Unfold

I saw a pretty purple butterfly sitting on the limb of a blossomed tree. Her wings fully outstretched I wished to spy. I said, “Unfold your loveliness to me.” When I spot wee birds inside a nest, They can’t know what life has for them in store. They’re still fed by parents as they rest. Oh, unfold your wings and let me see you soar! Marigolds in the summer garden growing. I still recall you as small buds of gold as I sat beside the cool stream flowing. I loved to see you open and unfold. Now a letter with me I’ve yet to read. I wonder what news for me that it might hold. Afraid to see, I know I must proceed. The letter from my lover I unfold. Butterflies, birds, and flowers, all so sweet. My sweet love – do I really know him well? I tremble! Weeks passed since we last did meet. The letter I now unfold to know his tale. April 17, 2023 for the Writing Challenge - 'U' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France
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Date: 4/27/2023 2:33:00 PM
This is one of your best Andrea. Beautiful write that inspires. Great job!
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Date: 4/19/2023 1:39:00 PM
Hey Andrea, Congratulations such a captivating and gorgeous write.
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Date: 4/19/2023 10:09:00 AM
Your poem unfolded beautifully, Andrea! Congratulations on your big win!
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Date: 4/19/2023 8:20:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, This is so well written. You did a great job with your chosen word. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/19/2023 5:57:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for sharing your lovely poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 4/18/2023 6:12:00 PM
Sweet mystery Andrea. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/18/2023 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Andrea
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Date: 4/18/2023 5:49:00 PM
Great use of the word Andrea, Lovely write
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Date: 4/18/2023 4:46:00 PM
- Congratulations on once again your top first place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 4/18/2023 2:09:00 PM
Oh wow! This is simply too tender and beautiful, Andrea! Marvellous! Warmest congratulations on your top win
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Date: 4/18/2023 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Unfold" is a wonderful write.  Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 4/18/2023 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations! Worthy of your win! Love it! Higs ~ Kim
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Date: 4/18/2023 1:56:00 PM
Always a pleasure your poems, Andrea. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/18/2023 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Andrea. I liked the flow and rhythm, as well as your wonderful imagery.
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Date: 4/17/2023 4:08:00 PM
I was waiting for a declaration of love:) Your usual great write, Andrea.
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Date: 4/17/2023 12:11:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Andrea - All the best :) - hugs
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