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Unfinished Poem-2

Wanton words or bits of paper Flotsam and jetsam or progenitors Damp squibs or ticking time bombs Collect..and recollect Their golden worth, silverfish and all Revived or transmigrated To touch earth’s core and zodiac zones To recreate vibes syncing with a smart sun On pretty turf bearing its sweet burden Of coy blooms or breeze bushed On mornings lying about in yards like spilt milk Words that wouldn’t miss the woods for the tree Moving along paths, straight or wavy Slicing through sheer life Leaving left and right little islands Of sunshine or sombre nights, Bristling,though, with rain on fresh page The epic stage for an unfinished call Once left reticulated with a dumb aridity. For Carol Brown's 'Pieces of paper..A poet's heart' By: S.Jagathsimhan nair, 14 sept 11 No.1 in the above contest

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Date: 3/7/2012 9:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Jag! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2012 6:21:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:09:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:07:00 PM
congrats Jag on an eloquent write3 and win luv.. first place winner for sure..
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:30:00 AM
Congrats, SJ. Awesome write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/4/2012 7:00:00 PM
jag .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD
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Date: 9/24/2011 8:11:00 PM
wow, so much imagery on this one, S. and I see you won the contest with it.Congratulations.
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Date: 9/20/2011 3:07:00 AM
Congrats on this fine winning piece, poet. You have penned exactly how I feel when faced with writing. You have a similar writing style to Nette in this entry and it is divine. Again, congrats. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:41:00 PM
Congrats on 1st Place, Jag. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:37:00 PM
This is such a neat poem, I am learning from your skill. Again, an honour to share the first place position with so many skilled poets. Congratulations on your first place win. Lee
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:41:00 AM
CONGRATS JAG ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE WIN WITH WONDERFUL WORDS LUV..
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Date: 9/19/2011 9:26:00 AM
Cleverly woven into a rare delight. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:48:00 PM
All the feelings and emotions as we travel through life are described in this great verse Jag. Love how you take the descriptions above the acctual way of it.
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