Unfair

Rest in peace... The mosquito died, because he was too fat. He was slow and then..., not. Do not think... that means abundance is bad. It is simply misused, and even misunderstood.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/7/2019 8:49:00 AM

There is truth to this. Mind you the skinny ones don’t always survive.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/7/2019 10:06:00 AM

Not if I can do something about it. they are quite the problem here at times. I found a wolf spider running fast last night across the floor. He made it... barely... hehe...I am usually faster... Ann

Xuefeng Pan

Date: 8/6/2019 11:25:00 PM

It's fair for him but unfair for the things being used as his food providers...thoughtful writing.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/6/2019 11:37:00 PM

It is so, we are happy and fat, not thinking... that without speed, we will be gone. It is a balance to be watched. Have such a lovely night. Ann