Unexpected

living a whirlwind some very unexpected coming and going 4/20/2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/23/2022 7:11:00 PM

Let the winds whirl, as long as we have frosted our hair om place! lol. Good one, Eve. Peace, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/23/2022 1:23:00 PM

Hi my beautiful philosopher, I'm glad they briefly come and go as whirlwinds should, but perhaps they are necessary for us to understand the essence of life. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Valsa George

Date: 4/21/2022 9:10:00 AM

Unexpectedly, whirl winds may come, shaking our very foundation. But believe that as they come, they will go and better days would come ! A beautiful senryu !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/21/2022 4:26:00 AM

With a whirlwind life, one never knows where they might land. Life is like that for some many today and I think they need to slow down and live in the moment some each day. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/21/2022 2:13:00 AM

Perfect haiku. Hugs.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/20/2022 6:48:00 PM

So true. I can feel the whirlwind lately. Well done :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/20/2022 2:45:00 PM

It appears that life is a whirl wind these days and we don't know which end of the wind to unravel at times, hang on, better days must be ahead I'm sure, Love & hope, two things not to give up on, xo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/20/2022 11:53:00 AM

Best wishes for more comings! Aloha!