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Unending Bliss - Afterglow Wish

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Written: March 31st, 2025, for contest, Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann ************ After basking in yesterday's afterglow, I divested my vestments to shift in cognitive mindset. I stroll toward the horizon. where the azure sky embraces the vast sea blue. Waves dance. With silvered clouds, Creating an orchestra The wind and light are present. Sallow shadows scintillate. In Moonlight Melodies... As dusk settles, casting a shimmering awe that echoes of The splendor of the galaxies abounds. In every breath, A promise resonates, to the dawn that dwells within me. Gliding on golden wings a sovereign among the kings As light swirls beneath the Milky Way,  The cosmos shines brilliantly. In a pearly gown. Angels slide, Unleashing their power to restore their lost throne. With flickering wings, Wield the sword of stone their footsteps inscribe a path of golden light, As they conquer the onyx depths of an obsidian night. Loving blasts their souls. angel wings shake in sadness, where grief and despair are hefty, seeking an aerial citrine nirvana I recall it sharply, as if it were yesterday, Tears mar the silky pillows. as honeysuckle It oozes from eager lips. — There is a longing for satisfaction. Lipstick etches its mark. He left an imprint on his bare skin. Even now, those intertwined chains of Memory ensnares me., As well-oiled fingers traverse the curves of the sensuous body, ordinary yet glowing in the sunlight, filled with a relentless passion. Nervous tension shattered,  striking, akin to a diamond on ebony velvet. As her body warmed and became silky, Her lips melted and tasted delicious. They expressed love ardently. and hugged fervently. swept up in passion and longing, wishing the moment might last forever, cocooned in each other's arms, and felt blissfully pleased, Polishing words into gems, dusted garnet, with sunset slips In citrine clouds cast There was a ray of magenta skies. I wish for unending delight.  and utter bliss in the afterglow.

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Date: 4/2/2025 5:05:00 PM
Your passion shines in this one Lasaad. Such a pleasure to read and experienced my friend. So many great metaphors unique and clever. This was a wonderful journey you took us through and for giving us that experience It is a favorite for me. Thanks for taking me there. Fav and God bless you...
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Date: 4/1/2025 10:01:00 PM
"I stroll toward the horizon. where the azure sky embraces the vast sea blue. " Your journey to love and its consummation is made ethereal and is expressed through the metaphor of the setting sun and its afterglow. Your poem has sprouted springs of joy in my heart. Dear Lasaad, you are indeed so gifted. You have made the poem so sensuous. "Even now, those intertwined chains of Memory ensnares me., As well-oiled fingers traverse the curves of the sensuous body," Lovely lines.. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 4/1/2025 2:24:00 PM
Hello Sotto, Wow. Your poem feels like a journey, like stepping into a dream where each line glimmers with emotion and imagery. It’s so raw, yet so ethereal. I could feel the passion, the longing, and the beauty of the cosmos intertwined with something deeply human. It’s stunning, truly. Keep creating magic! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 4/1/2025 10:35:00 AM
Great poem writing with imagery.
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Date: 4/1/2025 5:00:00 AM
- You are truly skilled at polishing words into gems, Las :) - Beautiful :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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