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Undressed- a Collaboration

She felt his presence by her side
Her first reaction – unimpressed.
She turned her head, a toss of hair,
The situation she assessed.

Maybe it was the dauntless smile
Perhaps the wicked twinkling eyes
The self-assurance in his poise...
Do warning bells ever suffice?

She sipped her drink and options weighed
He praised her looks and wispy gown
His flavoured words - delicacy
Her guard she weakly lowered down.  

Till late at night beneath the stars
They danced to music, hands on hips
If ever doubts had crossed her mind
Erased they were by burning lips. 

She found him suave and debonair
His face, ethereal, divine
Attentive eyes looked deep within
His lips still tasted of sweet wine.

The music played; he held her tight
Each sense alive and needing more
She whispered breathlessly to him,
"There's more to me you must explore."

Behind closed doors, he lay her down
And kissed each part that he undressed
Before her nakedness was shown
Her face he tenderly caressed.

"I will not take what is not mine; 
You will not be a one night stand."
"My love," she said with bated breath,
You'll guide my life; I'll guide your hand."

A Callman Collaboration (Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 9:05 AM
Enjoyable to read again. Thanks for your visit. Hugs Rick.
Mcconnell Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 8:14 AM
A blessed piece full of passion and love, Eileen, Paul and you have done a super collaboration! Masterful penning! Gordon
Raven Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Hi Eileen, a wonderful collaboration by you and Paul. Such a passionate sensual piece with such strong, clear imagery. The gentle words bring the reader into the heart of the passion. This piece was crafted by two true poets. This is excellent work. well done to the two of you. A fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Hello Eiieen, this poem has a lot of passion. Have a nice evening my friend.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Tender and passionate. An enjoyable read. Well done both of you. I’m glad I dropped by to taste this delicacy.
Warrior Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 3:09 PM
Awesome collab my beautiful friend...well done Paul & Eileen...love & collabs...^WW^
Mcconnell Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 1:16 PM
A beautiful write so blessedly penned, a collaboration supremely done both Paul and Eileen. Great stuff!, have a great day, Gordon
Salehi Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 2:45 PM
A surreal experience, reading this creative poem! I felt as though I was dancing with time, but did not quite know the dance steps! An intriguing write
Wigley Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Wow, you and Paul work together so well, awesome synergy. Well done both! Viv x
Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Your silky, sexy and seamless collaboration with Paul is sensually scrumptious, Eileen. A fantastic passionate romance that enthralled me from start to finish - especially awesome is that great last line! Luscious poetry! Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
Callus Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Thank you my willing and talented collaborator:) Always a pleasure to mix ink with yours. Hugs // paul
Manassian Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 2:49 AM
The pleasure is all mine, dear.....as always. :) Hugs
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 11:53 AM
A beautiful interlude...bravo you two
Manassian Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 2:50 AM
Thanks, Tim. :) Much appreciated. Hope all is well with you and yours.
Krampe Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 6:33 PM
I always marvel at successful collaborations - this one is awesome.
Manassian Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 2:51 AM
Thank you, Agnes. Paul and I are comfortable with each other's muses. :) I appreciate the visit.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 6:05 PM
I must say to you too! ~Wonderful sensual pleasing read <3 xomo!
Manassian Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 2:51 AM
Sensual pleasing is always a wonderful thing, dear. Thanks for the comment and visit. Hugs
Green Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Wow!!!! This beautiful collaboration took my breath away. The theme, the flow and the rhyming were all just about perfect. Bravo to both poets for the seamless, sensual work you have shared.
Manassian Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thanks, Chris, for this high praise. I appreciate it. Paul and I have written over ten poems together. I'm hoping one day we could publish a book together....that would be a dream come true for me. :)
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