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She felt his presence by her side Her first reaction – unimpressed. She turned her head, a toss of hair, The situation she assessed. Maybe it was the dauntless smile Perhaps the wicked twinkling eyes The self-assurance in his poise... Do warning bells ever suffice? She sipped her drink and options weighed He praised her looks and wispy gown His flavoured words - delicacy Her guard she weakly lowered down. Till late at night beneath the stars They danced to music, hands on hips If ever doubts had crossed her mind Erased they were by burning lips. She found him suave and debonair His face, ethereal, divine Attentive eyes looked deep within His lips still tasted of sweet wine. The music played; he held her tight Each sense alive and needing more She whispered breathlessly to him, "There's more to me you must explore." Behind closed doors, he lay her down And kissed each part that he undressed Before her nakedness was shown Her face he tenderly caressed. "I will not take what is not mine; You will not be a one night stand." "My love," she said with bated breath, You'll guide my life; I'll guide your hand." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A Callman Collaboration (Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian)

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Date: 10/12/2019 11:03:00 PM
sensuality thoroughly beautiful and excel of writings; like it
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2019 12:30:00 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Mahtab. Regards // paul
Date: 11/26/2018 9:50:00 AM
Paul, you both have penned a sensual beautiful poem, well done ~
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/14/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. Writing with Eileen comes easy. Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2018 5:33:00 PM
Hi Paul, a wonderful collaboration by two true poets. I slowly savour each line in this wonderful co-write, the images , so powerful, so clear. An excellent sensual write by you both. Two poets who become one golden pen. This is a fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. your friend always....Mike.
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2018 10:16:00 AM
I like your complimentary remarks, Mike...Eileen will love them, too. Thank you for commenting and the fav. Best regards, my friend. // paul
Date: 9/13/2018 8:49:00 PM
Hi Paul, I read this piece on Eileen’s site but it is worthy of multiple reads. Well done!
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/15/2018 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Richard. Always a pleasure to have you visiting:) Regards // paul
Date: 9/2/2018 6:00:00 AM
A wonderful collaboration Paul and Eileen, you two write so well together, especially with your sensual writes. Your last stanza, is very creative, truly loved it and a fave for me....Maria hugs
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2018 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, Maria. Having just read your "Music of the Night" I believe that you too excel where sensual writes are concerned! Due praise should go to Eileen who wound up the poem with that superb stanza which you found worthy of mention. Hugs // paul
Date: 9/1/2018 2:30:00 PM
Poetry like this is a pure joy to read. You and Eileen are a dream writing team! This one is glowing hot with passion's embers. Wow! I just loved it! Congratulations to you both! : )
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/18/2018 4:28:00 PM
Great minds!!!: )
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/1/2018 5:21:00 PM
Hi Connie...incidentally I have just used the phrase 'a joy to read' in my answer to Susan's comments! Thank you for your glowing reaction to our collaboration; it means a lot to both of us. ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 8/31/2018 8:25:00 PM
Your silky smooth and seamless collaboration with Eileen is scrumptiously sensual, Paul. Fantastic and enthralling passion from start to finish - especially that great last line! Luscious poetry! Warmest wishes and hugs always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/1/2018 7:38:00 PM
There's never enough adjectives or adverbs to adequately describe the beauty or impact of your poetry, my dear friend.. :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/1/2018 5:15:00 PM
The lovely adjectives and adverbs with which you decorate your feedback are a joy to read, Susan. Technically, Eileen's writing and mine are very similar, thus there is hardly ever any need for changes or corrections. ~ Eileen will be truly pleased by your comments. ~ Warm regards and hugs, my friend. // paul
Date: 8/29/2018 10:34:00 AM
Wonderful steamy seamless write, congrats to you both!
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2018 4:54:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely comments, John. Regards // paul
Date: 8/28/2018 6:32:00 PM
I always marvel at successful collaborations - this one is awesome.
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2018 4:53:00 PM
Your lovely comments are cherished, Agnes...thank you! Regards // paul
Date: 8/28/2018 6:04:00 PM
Wonderful sensual pleasing read ;) xomo
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2018 5:54:00 PM
Your pleasure is our pleasure, Maureen:) Thank you. Regards // paul
Date: 8/28/2018 4:02:00 PM
This is simply awesome..a fast moving movie, getting hotter with each new screen..the ending is superb. Kudos to you both Paul and Eileen..an excellent collaboration!
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2018 5:56:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely and encouraging comments, Vijay! I can assure you that Eileen will appreciate them as much as I do. Regards // paul
Date: 8/28/2018 3:24:00 PM
Paul, I commented on Eileen's post but feel I need to pop in here and tell you what a fantastic job you two did with this poem. This was amazing, so smooth and seamless, not to mention hot and steamy. Great job.
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2018 5:46:00 PM
You are very kind, Chris! Your complimentary remarks are truly appreciated. Regards // paul
Date: 8/28/2018 3:18:00 PM
So who is the naughty one? ;) Paul...always a pleasure to write with you. Just simply delightful. Hugs
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2018 4:51:00 PM
I wonder who instigated this...but even more who did the ending:) The pleasure is mine, Eileen. Your influence guides my pen. Hugs // paul

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