Notes About The Poem

Undressed

She felt his presence by her side
Her first reaction – unimpressed.
She turned her head, a toss of hair,
The situation she assessed.

Maybe it was the dauntless smile
Perhaps the wicked twinkling eyes
The self-assurance in his poise...
Do warning bells ever suffice?

She sipped her drink and options weighed
He praised her looks and wispy gown
His flavoured words - delicacy
Her guard she weakly lowered down.  

Till late at night beneath the stars
They danced to music, hands on hips
If ever doubts had crossed her mind
Erased they were by burning lips. 

She found him suave and debonair
His face, ethereal, divine
Attentive eyes looked deep within
His lips still tasted of sweet wine.

The music played; he held her tight
Each sense alive and needing more
She whispered breathlessly to him,
"There's more to me you must explore."

Behind closed doors, he lay her down
And kissed each part that he undressed
Before her nakedness was shown
Her face he tenderly caressed.

"I will not take what is not mine; 
You will not be a one night stand."
"My love," she said with bated breath,
You'll guide my life; I'll guide your hand."

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A Callman Collaboration (Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bangalee Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 11:03 PM
sensuality thoroughly beautiful and excel of writings; like it
Callus Avatar
October 17, 2019 at 12:30 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Mahtab. Regards // paul
La France Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Paul, you both have penned a sensual beautiful poem, well done ~
Callus Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Thank you, Constance. Writing with Eileen comes easy. Regards // paul
Raven Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Hi Paul, a wonderful collaboration by two true poets. I slowly savour each line in this wonderful co-write, the images , so powerful, so clear. An excellent sensual write by you both. Two poets who become one golden pen. This is a fave. Have a wonderful Wednesday. your friend always....Mike.
Callus Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 10:16 AM
I like your complimentary remarks, Mike...Eileen will love them, too. Thank you for commenting and the fav. Best regards, my friend. // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 8:49 PM
Hi Paul, I read this piece on Eileen’s site but it is worthy of multiple reads. Well done!
Callus Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, Richard. Always a pleasure to have you visiting:) Regards // paul
Williams Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 6:00 AM
A wonderful collaboration Paul and Eileen, you two write so well together, especially with your sensual writes. Your last stanza, is very creative, truly loved it and a fave for me....Maria hugs
Callus Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, Maria. Having just read your "Music of the Night" I believe that you too excel where sensual writes are concerned! Due praise should go to Eileen who wound up the poem with that superb stanza which you found worthy of mention. Hugs // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Poetry like this is a pure joy to read. You and Eileen are a dream writing team! This one is glowing hot with passion's embers. Wow! I just loved it! Congratulations to you both! : )
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Great minds!!!: )
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Hi Connie...incidentally I have just used the phrase 'a joy to read' in my answer to Susan's comments! Thank you for your glowing reaction to our collaboration; it means a lot to both of us. ~ Warm regards // paul
Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Your silky smooth and seamless collaboration with Eileen is scrumptiously sensual, Paul. Fantastic and enthralling passion from start to finish - especially that great last line! Luscious poetry! Warmest wishes and hugs always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 7:38 PM
There's never enough adjectives or adverbs to adequately describe the beauty or impact of your poetry, my dear friend.. :)
Callus Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 5:15 PM
The lovely adjectives and adverbs with which you decorate your feedback are a joy to read, Susan. Technically, Eileen's writing and mine are very similar, thus there is hardly ever any need for changes or corrections. ~ Eileen will be truly pleased by your comments. ~ Warm regards and hugs, my friend. // paul
Hamilton Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Wonderful steamy seamless write, congrats to you both!
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thank you for the lovely comments, John. Regards // paul
Krampe Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 6:32 PM
I always marvel at successful collaborations - this one is awesome.
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Your lovely comments are cherished, Agnes...thank you! Regards // paul
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Wonderful sensual pleasing read ;) xomo
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 5:54 PM
Your pleasure is our pleasure, Maureen:) Thank you. Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 4:02 PM
This is simply awesome..a fast moving movie, getting hotter with each new screen..the ending is superb. Kudos to you both Paul and Eileen..an excellent collaboration!
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Thank you for the lovely and encouraging comments, Vijay! I can assure you that Eileen will appreciate them as much as I do. Regards // paul
Green Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 3:24 PM
Paul, I commented on Eileen's post but feel I need to pop in here and tell you what a fantastic job you two did with this poem. This was amazing, so smooth and seamless, not to mention hot and steamy. Great job.
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 5:46 PM
You are very kind, Chris! Your complimentary remarks are truly appreciated. Regards // paul
Manassian Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 3:18 PM
So who is the naughty one? ;) Paul...always a pleasure to write with you. Just simply delightful. Hugs
Callus Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 4:51 PM
I wonder who instigated this...but even more who did the ending:) The pleasure is mine, Eileen. Your influence guides my pen. Hugs // paul
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