Undone

17 years old
on your way up to the knob
you were in a passing zone
the driver was Robb
he passed a pastors car
but a truck came round the bend
he went to go back over
and the other two crashed into him
you and your three friends
were thrown from the car split in half
people that dont know you
oh those people yell and laugh
they try to blame it on you all
and it makes me so mad
because they dont care that we're in pain
and that your never comming back
you died on the side of the road
with out the ones you love around
angelica died on the other
there wasnt any loving sounds
now we're all left here
crying tears of pain
and your smileing face
wont dare to leave our brain
we're broken down and crying
we dont know what to do
we wish youd just come back 
cause razz we love you
now robbies in the hospital 
and pey's missing an arm
robbie better make it
i know  your watching up there
where ever you are
russell your an angel
and so is angelica 
your watching with your halo
and i know your missing us
i know you see us in pain
your helping robbie and surely peyton too
russ you were so beautiful 
my oh my do we miss you 
and now, my lord, your gone
one car crash on a bad road
my god this is all so wrong
and that i do know
for all the tears ive cried
and all the sins ive done
id give it all away
for this to be undone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 6:40 AM
Oh God how very hard..awful tragedies..just awful, I'm crying reading it. Perhaps each readers tears with help to wash away your pain. I can only hope so! Light & Love
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 6:22 AM
Rain this is more than a poem as we both know. sad and painful as life itself. great write although i wish it wasnt true. great job
Mcnaughton Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 1:43 PM
How sad rain, so sorry for your loss. xx
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