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Undone

17 years old on your way up to the knob you were in a passing zone the driver was Robb he passed a pastors car but a truck came round the bend he went to go back over and the other two crashed into him you and your three friends were thrown from the car split in half people that dont know you oh those people yell and laugh they try to blame it on you all and it makes me so mad because they dont care that we're in pain and that your never comming back you died on the side of the road with out the ones you love around angelica died on the other there wasnt any loving sounds now we're all left here crying tears of pain and your smileing face wont dare to leave our brain we're broken down and crying we dont know what to do we wish youd just come back cause razz we love you now robbies in the hospital and pey's missing an arm robbie better make it i know your watching up there where ever you are russell your an angel and so is angelica your watching with your halo and i know your missing us i know you see us in pain your helping robbie and surely peyton too russ you were so beautiful my oh my do we miss you and now, my lord, your gone one car crash on a bad road my god this is all so wrong and that i do know for all the tears ive cried and all the sins ive done id give it all away for this to be undone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2009 6:40:00 AM
Oh God how very hard..awful tragedies..just awful, I'm crying reading it. Perhaps each readers tears with help to wash away your pain. I can only hope so! Light & Love
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Date: 9/29/2009 6:22:00 AM
Rain this is more than a poem as we both know. sad and painful as life itself. great write although i wish it wasnt true. great job
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Date: 9/28/2009 1:43:00 PM
How sad rain, so sorry for your loss. xx
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