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Undone

I want to live again. I have forgotten how. When to begin? It has to be now. I lost faith, and trust In everyone, in me. I must adjust. So hard to just be. Alone, what and who I am. I am afraid, it is what I know. So unsure, it's all a sham. I think it 's time to go. Will I get there? But I may not leave. I don't think I care. My loss, I grieve.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/12/2019 6:06:00 AM
Yes, like the last line, it takes walking through grief of loss in situations to get there. You are not alone and this is an excellent poem Sandy :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 10/13/2019 12:07:00 AM
Thank you as always Heidi for your insight and input. Glad you like it. A bit different for me.
Date: 10/11/2019 10:50:00 PM
A most heartfelt poem, Sandra. Most deserving of poetry hugs.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 10/13/2019 12:05:00 AM
Thank you Line, for you lovely comment and the poetry hugs, especially the hugs!
Date: 10/11/2019 10:22:00 PM
Your poem has depth that is not often found in a poem so brief!
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 10/13/2019 12:03:00 AM
Thank you Caren, I consider that a compliment. Nice to get.
Date: 10/11/2019 9:23:00 PM
Nice rhyme. Blessings to you, Gina
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 10/13/2019 12:01:00 AM
Thank you Gina. I appreciate you comment and blessings.

Book: Shattered Sighs