Underneath Turbulent Waters

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Let us meet in the quietude of the night, 
As the blushing, crimson moon
Rises high and lights the dark deep.
Where mesmerizing mermaids dance,
Celebrating mid-summer merriment.
My wife and I dare not go for a swim
As even in the ebony night 
We could see large fish crossing the ocean
In search of tasty food.
So we stay on the soft sandy beach
Admiring the shining moon.
We’ll kiss and hide in stygian caves
Neath rough billows, as we run apart
We feel the joy and, in the night,
Oh, euphoric scene, just you and me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/2/2022 11:20:00 AM
Very lovely. Your poem are growing more intense. Love this.
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Date: 7/25/2022 2:11:00 PM
Hi Victor, you old romantic you. This is a song that sings straight into the heart. You always paint such a special canvas with your wonderful words, Victor. You hold the reader entranced. What peace your scene does bring. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always ..... Mike.
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Date: 7/6/2022 3:39:00 PM
A rendezvous, just you, your WIFE and large fish, in the vast oceanic vista! Viva La Kiss! You are quite magnanimous for inserting your wife in your poems Victor. Bravo!
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Date: 7/6/2022 6:35:00 AM
A pretty opener: Let us meet in the quietude of the night
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Date: 7/4/2022 2:31:00 AM
Very euphoric Victor, what a night of romance that even brought mermaids out to dance. Lovely poetry… Belle
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Date: 7/3/2022 7:30:00 PM
Another truly wonderful poem, from you. Victor.
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Date: 7/3/2022 1:02:00 PM
Picturesque and creatively passionate!.... Silpika
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Date: 7/3/2022 9:56:00 AM
Another true beauty Victor….you are such a romantic soul! Debx
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Date: 7/3/2022 5:21:00 AM
Soft, sweet, and very romantic Victor. Your last two lines summarize perfectly! Linda
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Date: 7/2/2022 10:55:00 PM
How romantic!!! Such a beautiful verse that gives instant smile ... Loved it and my fav...
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Date: 7/2/2022 1:28:00 PM
Ahh!! Romantic lines penned. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by my page your comments are always uplifting. Sara
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Date: 7/2/2022 10:44:00 AM
The last two lines sums up this lovely telling of a romantic night very well. The blushing, crimson moon, is an example of the fine imagery here. Hope your day is a nice one, Evelyn :)
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Date: 7/2/2022 10:30:00 AM
Romance and nostalgia. So poetic.
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Date: 7/2/2022 10:01:00 AM
Such a beautiful romantic write Victor apt for the picture... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/2/2022 9:16:00 AM
Euphoric indeed: Where mesmerizing mermaids dance, Celebrating mid-summer merriment.~ hugs
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Date: 7/2/2022 7:12:00 AM
Lovely, shame though afraid to get in the water. You are a romantic.. Blessings friend
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Date: 7/2/2022 2:12:00 AM
Quite a romantic picture painted so eloquently, Victor! Enjoyed!
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Date: 7/2/2022 12:39:00 AM
The scene you discribe is pure romantic bliss Victor. Greetings from Turkey, struggling in the 36c heat. Tom
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Date: 7/1/2022 6:01:00 AM
Many things are experienced underneath the quietude of a silent night full of mystery and moonlight, nicely penned dear Victor, much love xo
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Date: 7/1/2022 6:01:00 AM
The poetry you just wrote is fantastic, Victor. You set the scene well and keep the reader enthralled as they go on an exciting journey through a fantastic world you've built.
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Date: 7/1/2022 4:49:00 AM
You paint a lovely romantic scene and take the reader on a blissful journey. Excellent write--on the path to love.
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Date: 7/1/2022 4:01:00 AM
A fantasy world where mermaids dance, with a hint of danger from a large fish..Nicely done...Delice
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Date: 7/1/2022 3:08:00 AM
What a wonderful rendezvous for the lovers to meet ! A blushing crimson moon in the sky above and a moon blanched shore below..... ! Heavenly ambiance....
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