Underneath a Moonlit Sky

One night - arm in arm - we started walking home. We had been dancing and it had grown late, but oh, how bright was the night! No one else was around us, but encircling the moon, the stars above were winking down on us! Even though this was our first date, the chemistry was strong. The air was chill, so we stopped. As he wrapped his coat around me, he stayed in that one spot, simply looking into my eyes. The stars kept winking. I, however, was unblinking as I gazed back into his shining eyes. If there were sounds, I did not hear them. The ground could have vanished from beneath our feet, and I would not have known it. Extraordinary sensations pulsated through my body. Giddy, I felt as if I almost could not breathe. In that magic moment, he placed soft fingers beneath my chin, tilting my face just right as he leaned in ever so gently for that first kiss underneath a moonlit sky. July 31, 2020

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Date: 9/16/2020 6:32:00 PM
lovely romantic piece good to have some magic about.
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Date: 9/4/2020 6:45:00 PM
I felt the words in your piece and it brought me back to a memory. That’s what we try to do is enlighten, escape, etc to the unknown through our words that we put down. If we can accomplish that with our poetry I feel that we have accomplished our goals of art. If I can make someone’s day better by them reading my work I feel I’ve done my job. I see we both placed 1st place so congrats on your win!! Enjoy your day
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Date: 9/4/2020 2:55:00 PM
Love the romance and magic you wove. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/3/2020 11:41:00 AM
Congrats on your #1 magically romantic free verse of love's first kiss.
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Date: 8/5/2020 6:55:00 AM
I'll not exclude you among the winners, so congratulations on your lines.
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Date: 8/5/2020 5:36:00 AM
Somehow I missed this beautiful write before. BIG congrats on your TOP win, Andrea.
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Date: 8/5/2020 3:12:00 AM
"The ground could have vanished from beneath our feet, and I would not have known it"~ lol, that shows how diligently you were romancing:-) Enjoyed this lovely write dear Andrea mam. My mind chose this theme for romance but ended up choosing another :-P. Congratulations on your top win .Keep inspiring. Much love~Deepa:-)
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Date: 8/4/2020 3:29:00 PM
Tantalizingly romantic and lovely. Your free verse wins another contest which tells me you are better at this than you know! Congrats, my friend ~ John
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I love your end with the first kiss. It was a very special kiss/ending. A wonderful story/poem. Enjoy your win and day........
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:13:00 PM
Loved the serene melody that enchants hearts with this poem of yours Andrea. This one has got a velvet touch Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on winning 1st place in my contest with this great poem, Andrea:-) Striking imagery!
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Date: 8/4/2020 4:33:00 AM
Simply enchanting. This touches hearts who discover it's wonders. So amazing. I love it and you. Bless you with all your heart desires.
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Date: 7/31/2020 2:10:00 PM
I still get that giddy feeling when he looks into my eyes...that look! Nice, Andrea!
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Date: 7/31/2020 6:40:00 AM
Sounds absolutely delightful, Andrea:)
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