Undergrowth

black bat flower speaks to me
invited intensity, profound propensity.
its wings and whiskers —
spooky, grotesque.
its bouquet of flowers, teeth
that devour fear,
courage to stand my ground.

it’s said, don’t linger too long
in its centerfold song.
deep darkness swallows
one whole,
an eye entrenched
in one’s soul.

blue moon or so,
a pity party,
boundary of bracts and bracteoles,
seething bat seeds,

tears that moisten undergrowth soil
with brisk breeze.

one’s madness, compassion,
strength, prattle unleashed.

11/17/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Pandit Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 6:02 AM
WOW! This is simply awesome--loved the choreographed words...the entire poem! Into my FAVES. I vote this for POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Made my day!
One Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:08 AM
tears that moisten undergrowth soil with brisk breeze.... I can feel you angst and I love that line.. you are a very talented poet Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:43 AM
Thank you so much, my dear friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 3:04 AM
The Good God knows where you found this flower. Not common I think. Stil a lovely poem. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:48 PM
This poem is profoundly interesting Kim. I suspect it’s metaphoric layers were not easy to pen.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Thank you, Caren!
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