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Undergrowth

black bat flower speaks to me invited intensity, profound propensity. its wings and whiskers — spooky, grotesque. its bouquet of flowers, teeth that devour fear, courage to stand my ground. it’s said, don’t linger too long in its centerfold song. deep darkness swallows one whole, an eye entrenched in one’s soul. blue moon or so, a pity party, boundary of bracts and bracteoles, seething bat seeds, tears that moisten undergrowth soil with brisk breeze. one’s madness, compassion, strength, prattle unleashed. 11/17/2020

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Date: 11/18/2020 6:02:00 AM
WOW! This is simply awesome--loved the choreographed words...the entire poem! Into my FAVES. I vote this for POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2020 8:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! Made my day!
Date: 11/18/2020 3:08:00 AM
tears that moisten undergrowth soil with brisk breeze.... I can feel you angst and I love that line.. you are a very talented poet Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2020 5:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, my dear friend!
Date: 11/18/2020 3:04:00 AM
The Good God knows where you found this flower. Not common I think. Stil a lovely poem. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2020 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 11/17/2020 7:48:00 PM
This poem is profoundly interesting Kim. I suspect it’s metaphoric layers were not easy to pen.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!

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