Under Their Spell

waves head for shore their crests have fingers that beckon me enter their surf under their spell I advance

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/13/2020 1:50:00 PM

Oh yes, sink into that next wave and ride; say hi to a couple of dolphins for me, too.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 9:30:00 PM

Hi, Dolphins!... Tell me: Do the dolphins need to be a couple? Or can they be loosely associated, even random?! Smiles, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/13/2020 9:16:00 AM

I am ready to dive into this ocean!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 9:29:00 PM

OK. Me, too. You dive in first: Beware of sharks and surfers recently returned from China! Smiles, Gershoniii

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/12/2020 11:48:00 PM

Love it, Gershon. I am feeling that beckoning, like the mermaid I am inside. LOL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 2:53:00 PM

Now you tell me you're a mermaid, after all this time. I don't know though. Something's fishy there... :) Gershon

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/12/2020 11:02:00 PM

What a poetic description of surfing.. Great imagism Gershon..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 2:50:00 PM

Thanks, Jenish Grab your surfboard. Lake Michigan's wide open today. Catch a wave (10 degrees Fahrenheit with a stiff with a stiff Arctic wind howling too!) I t's a beautiful day! :) Gershon