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Under the Tree

I used to stay under the tree To watch black ants in front of me; They keep marching on, From twilight till dawn, While I just laze in summer spree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/13/2021 4:58:00 AM
Lovely, JCB. Watching nature brings peace to me. Hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 2/11/2021 2:56:00 PM
Hello JCB … I have done similar things. Watching nature in a small scale can be amazing with what goes on - thanks JCB - Lindsay
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Date: 6/25/2020 3:46:00 PM
Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem.
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Date: 6/22/2020 1:17:00 AM
I know when I sit idly I feel the ants must be watching me. This was witty. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/21/2020 6:28:00 AM
Oh you did a limerick.... Well done..
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Date: 6/19/2020 1:47:00 AM
I just laze in summer spree..... nice
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Date: 6/18/2020 10:41:00 PM
Very pretty! I love it, and it's in my faves. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/18/2020 8:51:00 PM
JCB, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.
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