Home » Poems » Robertina B. » Under the Sycamore Tree

Under the Sycamore Tree

Under the sycamore tree.. dance under the shade.. Reflection of the sun beats down.. Music fills the air.. dance to the beat.. let loose and sway.. A soulful melody.. Under the sycamore tree.. Day becomes night.. Moonlight shines.. Brilliant stars gleam.. Music fills the air.. Dancing gracefully while.. Crickets chime in to the beat.. Under the sycamore tree.. Solace has wrapped its arms around me.. Glowing with serenity.. Under the sycamore tree.. My home away .. From home..

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/4/2019 2:05:00 PM

I used to dance under a sycamore tree too. Sometimes even naked. Those were good times. I like you, your poetry and your sycamore)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/10/2019 10:20:00 AM

With the the rhythmical swaying of your verse, you have stirred long-ago memories in my mind and heart, Robertina, of magical moments spent under a sycamore tree. Thank you for the journey back in time. Wonderful! Best wishes, Gershon (soup mail, please)

Robertina B.
Date: 5/14/2019 3:39:00 PM

So happy I was able to bring forward nostalgic memories, in your mind and heart.. You are very welcome for the journey back in time, dear friend.. Many blessings to you!! As always, thank you for your support...

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/6/2019 12:03:00 PM

You set the mood so beautifully in this gem of a poem, Robertina. I really enjoyed this! :)

Robertina B.
Date: 5/14/2019 3:36:00 PM

Always appreciate your visit and lovely words, Laura.. Thank you!! Happy you enjoyed.. Have a blessed day!

Judy Ball

Date: 5/2/2019 4:24:00 AM

I love sitting in my garden swing in summer listening to the birds and bees and watching butterflies. Nicely done Robertina. Beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB

Robertina B.
Date: 5/14/2019 3:36:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely words and visit, Judy.. Nature is truly amazing!! Have a blessed day, my friend..

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 5/1/2019 2:16:00 PM

Sounds so comforting. Nicely written

Robertina B.
Date: 5/14/2019 3:34:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words and visit, Allen.. Appreciate it.. Blessings!!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/1/2019 10:16:00 AM

I do love this. I, too, have a "sycamore tree" to go and find solace.

Robertina B.
Date: 5/14/2019 3:34:00 PM

That's awesome you do too.. Thank you for your lovely visit and words, Sunlite.. Have a blessed day!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/1/2019 10:01:00 AM

I liked the rhythm of the repeating line, Robertina: under the sycamore tree..and the serenity of your words finding home away from home.

Robertina B.
Date: 5/14/2019 3:33:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness, my friend.. Always a pleasure when you visit.. Blessings to you!

Joshua Plourde

Date: 4/30/2019 8:50:00 PM

hey men want say you did great work on your poem well done job got min mind checking my poem out keep doing good work love see more

Robertina B.
Date: 5/1/2019 9:42:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and kind words, Joshua.. Much appreciated..