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Under the Surface

Deep in the recess of my mind dreams inform my life They tell of a handsome, confident man free from tears and strife They show a man with many friends who is loved by all A man who is smart and successful as well standing straight and tall If only now I could awaken and see that it’s all true I fear that only in my dreams will I ever have this view

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/31/2017 4:10:00 PM
Follow your dreams Mike. You are such a good writer who reaches the reader :)
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Date: 5/31/2017 2:07:00 PM
Make the best of what you have and be happy...things are always better in our dreams
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/31/2017 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Tim

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