Under the Rains She Purred

We enjoyed our walk below the autumn skies
Golden browns bloomed and graced our eyes

Hand in hand, through woods and fields
Marvelling at nature, and in what she yields

Darkness loomed on this late September afternoon
Clouds above massed, in impending monsoon

Slowly the rains fell from the skies
As the clouds opened in plentiful supply

I turned to my girl and she was on her knees
Her summer white dress in see through please

These autumn rains showed a lovely change in her
As she looked to the skies in delightful purr

Her wetted face had a glint in her eyes
As i kneeled before her, and her purr like cries

Our faces met, and our lips greet
In continual excite, repeat repeat

Sodden we are under this cascade of wet
This is one afternoon i will never forget





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Date: 3/1/2010 3:08:00 PM
So youthful in description. how you are able to capture my imagination and place me at scene!
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Date: 3/1/2010 1:52:00 PM
The passion just oozes in your words, Highlander. Another great romantic poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/1/2010 10:16:00 AM
Sounds like a memory that is entrenched with several stimuli...I looked up that plant in your other write and it is an illegal drug that is seized when DEA in America find it. The first pictures that I saw of it looked like something that I have growing in my yard called Red-Tip Fortina but I don't guess that is what it is for other plants that I saw didn't look like that. In one of the articles that was on the internet didn't say anything about it growing here. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:31:00 AM
Awesome job here James, thanks for stopping by with your comment. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/1/2010 7:48:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments James.Rgds Brian & congrats on your recent contest success
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:53:00 AM
Always the notebook!!! the ultimate chick flick.... HeHe.... Anyways, very good portrayal of love and passion in this treasure.....:JP]
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:43:00 AM
Romantic and beautiful...I love the rain on myface,I love the rain as much as i love the sun ,and this poem got me this sweet feeling.you reminded me of a movie'The Notebook',where the guy and girl where tog ether and it rained..and Im nt gonna tell you more,watch it..:)Lovely poem,,talented indeed..Charma
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