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why here? why this way ... is it a message just for me?? no note, no signs of impending doom ... you were all smiles this morning, mundane habits adhered to "have a good day, Sweetness - I love you" nose rub and a kiss, (the kiss WAS deeper than usual) and in your eyes ... something ... odd a touch of darkness, distance, chill ... it didn't strike me then, but now ... a sick feeling deep-down oh, dear God, did I miss something?!? not like me ... not at ALL ... I'm usually so perceptive, so attuned - especially to you ... to US your cold skin, shiny porcelain in the moonlight so horridly beautiful, so exquisitely horrid, (I retch) they place you tenderly in a plastic bag, zipping it slowly I will hate that sound now ... forever.

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Date: 3/29/2019 4:37:00 PM
No comment yet? OMG... I was gripped from the start Gregory. Everyone who loses someone this way forever asks themselves that question. You're an amazing poet. Please don't leave us!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/2/2019 1:03:00 PM
Oh, you are so kind, Jean, and I am so happy to get your comment ... just one other for now, but just one makes the writing worthwhile ... for some reason anytime I write about suicide I get little reaction, and I guess that's understandable. I just wish it were talked about and written about MORE, because it will never improve otherwise. Blessings and thanks, My Dear Friend! :-) <3

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