Under the Moon of Love

My newly bride not too thin
On honeymoon she decided to slim
We made love every night
Under the most lovely moonlight
And now the wanting tide can come in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Eggins Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 6:19 AM
James the title of this one got my attention ... really loved it and I see below me its a winner so congrates .. love Jayne x x x
Cwiak Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 10:52 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C
Freeman Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 5:16 PM
Congratulations James on your 4th place, Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Congrats James on your winning poem in the Bulge contest with this great write.. enjoy your wonderful win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations for your win, James. Well deserved. Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 9:33 AM
Make way for the tide by shedding a few pounds making love on the beach. Very funny, James. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Tideswell Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Thanks for your comments. I enjoyed your limerick; funny, romantic and cheeky all in one. Best of luck!
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 3:56 PM
hmmm, you worked off her weight with lovemaking! VERRRRY interesting, and cute!
Krumenaker Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Thank you for the comment on my poem i appreciate it i love this poem you are very good. ~Alicia~
Diva Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 1:09 PM
I appreciate your very nice comments Mr. Highlander James and enjoyed reading this funny poem ..I wrote poems for the contests for now as I like them so much. You are a very kind gentleman. Satin Doll Diva
Gorelick Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Im going to try this as soon as I find a fat man...hahahah..BG
Palli Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 11:53 AM
funny and romantic
Green Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 11:18 AM
You're a dork! That was really funny, good luck in the contest.
Roberts Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Sex as a diet plan, Maybe that would work better than salads, hmm . Good luck in contest
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