Under the Moon

My mind’s eye preoccupation,
I am captive to my guiding light,
the source of all my equivocal  influences.

Erik Satie under the moon,
Shadowy contours
against a nocturnal silver sky,  
my subliminal ambient impressionism.

I am walking a shrouded path,
trudging  through murky ponds
where I find the silhouette 
of cattails swaying against the moon.

Here, I inhale 
the night wind bouquet 
from which the violet violins 
play through all my dreams.

Published: PS: It's Still Poetry January 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 11/11/2020 3:01:00 PM
Hello Thomas Wells, you made me feel Like I walked this path with you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/12/2020 11:41:00 AM
Hello Thomas, I do think there is magic in the airas we walk the path together. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Thomas Wells
Date: 11/11/2020 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Darlene! Surely there would be such magic in the air, as we walked this path together. Have a wonderful evening.
Date: 6/19/2020 2:03:00 AM
A very deep and passionate poem
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Thomas Wells
Date: 10/8/2020 4:32:00 PM
Thank you Parvanendu! Be well good friend.
Date: 6/18/2020 5:06:00 AM
The moon always enchants with her air of mystery. I loved the way you ended this wonderful poem Thomas. xxoo
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Thomas Wells
Date: 6/18/2020 1:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie! Have a great day. Shalom and paz. xxoo
Date: 6/16/2020 5:40:00 PM
Hello Thomas Wells, I felt like i was there enjoying all this under the moon Have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/17/2020 10:19:00 AM
Hello Thomas Wells, a beautiful day here with sunshine.Enjoy your day my friend.
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Thomas Wells
Date: 6/16/2020 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Darlene! Enjoy your evening. :-)
Date: 6/15/2020 1:29:00 PM
Great Imagery Thomas!
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Thomas Wells
Date: 6/15/2020 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Paghunda! You just made my day a little brighter! :-)
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